muy buen trabajo

honestly moka was annoying last story and i really just want her to go away

Nice chapter love this

You should make a return to yokai academy aka part 3

Yes I want more of this story

Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story please update soon.

I agree with ceps moka has always been loyal, genuine, and honest to a fault where as kurumu has always been manipulating and conniving to get what she what she wanted I don't like her for ichigo. I believe that the better choices for ichigo would've been moka and ruby. This whole thing and it's prequel should be re-written.

You either need to cut moka out of the relationship or start including her as an actual part of it more cause honestly i dont really like kurumu its your story though but as it is you arent doing enough to build the moka part so when you do it seems rushed

Love this story hope it will continue

saw: past, tense. see: before the start, tense. seeing: in the middle of, tense.

Ughhhhhh
Moka hop off of Ichigo bro. Like he's already in love with someone else. How come you can't be like Ruby and just want him to be happy? Why does he need to be with you?
Stubborn little ho.

Is the ball still rolling? Sorry, I have to ask because I was looking though my old favorites and found this one, and I really miss it :(

Wonderful story. Romance was done well except for how un-godly slow your development is with the other characters. I mean not to sound like a flamer, but you should probably pick up the pace a bit here. Ruby is getting a gram of screen-time and Orihime is practically non-existent. Moka is finally making a tiny bit of progress, but it took about 400k words to get there. Anyway great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I almost expected a Monty Python Black Knight reference after Moka did that...

"She took a lot of blood from you"
"I've had worse."
"You lie!"
"No I'm not."
Points to the paleness in his face and gash in the neck "Then what's that?"
"Tis a flesh wound."

I love this story, it's been amazing so far. I like how Ichigo stays true to his canon personality without it seeming forced.