| Reviews for The Existentialist: An Epilogue |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2019 I love this story so much and for so many reasons. If you ever decide to come back to it, I will be here reading eagerly! Props on the impeccable writing style. |
Dance along the light of day chapter 3 . 7/31/2017 This was so well written. I loved it! Okay, gotta go and get myself a Jean Havoc somewhere |
Kotetsu.dono chapter 3 . 4/22/2017 Wow this is such a good fic and I can't believe it got abandoned. This is my shout into the void hoping this might come back. |
pyro-rocketeer chapter 3 . 7/6/2016 This is really really well written. I lovve your writings, so eloquent, so paced and this probably won't continue but there's always hopee :( Jean/Winry is just so charming and aslkjdnalskdn. You made them work, so well. And that cryptic sentence at the end. How could she ever imagine there was a life more fulfilling than this one? Also in the previous chapters, I liked the way you wrote their lemon. Most lemons are haphazard. You are a very controlled writer. You control the characters, the words you use to describe these scenes and the way these character function. |
CatfaceFluffy chapter 3 . 5/11/2014 Ok so apparently I ship Winry/Havoc now more than Winry/Ed. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2013 I just wanted to say that I love your writing. It's captivating, your characters are so real, dialogue refreshing and genuine feeling. I know you haven't updated this in awhile and probably not really active anymore. Just thought I'd let you know how much I liked it and wished there was more. Do you write your own stories? You should if you don't. They're great fanfictions :) |
Inwen chapter 3 . 6/1/2013 Jean and Winry? Can't say I ever pictured that happening...but in ties with the previous story I can see the fascination. Really sad this fic isn't finished, especially since the writing is so well executed. EdxWin is always endgame for me though, so while I appreciate her developing as a character and enriching her own life, I still keep my fingers crossed and hope Ed will pull his head out of his ass and they'll make up...Love Jean's character despite my dislike of his current love partner in this fic. You write them all spectacularly well. Hope one day you're inspired to finish this one. |
ec-writes chapter 1 . 5/14/2013 Gosh, I love this story. |
myyriad chapter 3 . 5/8/2013 I just... PLEASE PLEASE tell me you will update this. I don't really care when but oh I need to know what happens. I don't even have the words to properly describe how beautifully you write and not that it really matters because of course you know that, surely you must. |
danieldeon chapter 3 . 2/11/2013 It makes me so sad to know that you posted this continuation in 2010 and I'm just finding it in 2013 and there's been no update since. I've probably read the previous story 3 or more times since high school and I loved it. No fan fiction artist that I've seen to date has put so many real and relatable emotions into their pieces. As I am older I relate more to your characters and some of the things that Winry did in the old story I do now. I read it and scold myself of course. But much love and well wishes where ever you are and in whatever aspect of life you are in. |
ec-writes chapter 3 . 1/29/2013 How you managed to make me want Winry with someone other than Ed is a complete miracle. I love Jean in this story; he reminds me of my own boyfriend. Such an awesome pairing. Great job! |
IVIaedhros chapter 3 . 10/25/2012 Huh, not sure how this escaped me...hmm I've decided now that this pattern of whimsical angst building up to some sort of semi-transcendental happiness works very well for you (obviously, you already knew that)... And it's not that you write a great Roy Mustang or even a great Havoc that makes these stories enjoyable, it's that you so wonderfully put in cosmic level angst, joy, forgiveness, etc. into these little human interactions through the eyes of a teen girl and do it with a little touch of grace. |
sadana chapter 3 . 5/22/2012 This is wonderfully written! Please update soon! |
Soprana chapter 3 . 5/17/2012 A very interesting story. I like how Jean and Winry are, evolving, should I say? Can't wait for an update. |
murcuh chapter 3 . 7/31/2011 This story is so good. Are you going to continue, because I would really like that. Thank you for writing this. |