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Interesting way to set him and Ino up, I'll say. Can't wait to see how things turn out with everyone.

This chapter was definantly awsome! I loved it! I liked the part with team seven and the sword an seal

Good story. Please update. Poor Tazuna.

I like this story so far. Interesting pairing for Naruto. I wonder if he'll leave Konoha now or if he does, how he'll still be in touch with Ino (I mean Kitsune). Also, Zabuza's family name is Momochi, not Momoichi.

What I really like the most I think are your unique disclaimers. Instead of doing the same old, same old, you add humor to it. I like that.

Love the whole Ino and Naruto thing its so cute

Instant fail with the mob screaming demon while chasing after Naruto. It NEVER happened in canon, both the chasing or calling him demon. Give that shit a rest it's been done more times than a hooker on Main street. Try something new for your plot device rather then that lame bit, because you just lost a reader because of it.

this is great I look forward to more

i liked the frank part, and the ino part when naruto says "what kind of sick parents did you have?" that was funny

I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit. There were a few spelling issue, but they were minor. If you want me to point them out I can, but all in all it was much better than some of your previous chapters. The plot ran smoother, you had a bit more elaboration, the dialogue was fair and read smoothly (I particularly like how cocky Naruto is), and it was a good set up chapter for when things start to happen next. Excellent progression, and I think the story is going very well.

I'm still on the NaruHaku train (even if they don't end up together in the end... I would still love to see something between them... having the evil fangirl in me and whatnot). So, if there is a poll, that would be my vote. If I have to pick a girl for poor Naruto... hmmm? I guess it would have to be Hinata still. I mean you could really work that angle, especially since they've never met... it would be very interesting. She'd still be shy and Naruto is now cockier than ever... I'm just saying, don't count something out. ;)

Looking forward to the next update.

I say stick with what you like. Even though Hinata wouldn't like Naruto like she does in canon, that there is the challenge. Thinking of a way to get Hinata and Naruto together.

I loved your omake! XD And the story itself is awesome, too! 3

I like the idea of NaruIno. Actually overall, I like this whole story. Um if you like I can help with some grammar issues you have. Other then that this is very good. Keep up the good work.

A deadly serious Naruto and Ino, hmmmmmm, seeing how Ino is more practical than Sakara, she could fall for him and give him a reason to stay.

A fair chapter (personally, given how Naruto feels for Konoha, I think that he should fall for Temari or Yugito). Love the bit of humor with Naruto falling for a blond (and his banter with the Hokage). And I do have to ask: will you play up the androgyny of Deidara and have Naruto kinda turned on by him? (though, I don't know how Akatsuki could play in your story).

Final thoughts: I'm intrigued with what Naruto's plan is for him to willingly return to Konoha, and can't wait to read the hilarity of Naruto dodging all the attempts to get him to stay!