I'm sad to note that you don't seem to have updated in quite a while.

I'll wait, this is an extraordinary story. You've snagged another fan.

whoa...this is rather sensual and dark at the same time! You haven't updated for the longest time, so you should!

Just writing to let you know, you have a new fan, love this story!

finally you've updated! i keep thinking that you've abandoned this, but then you surprise me every once in a while with a new chapter.

o sorry but reading this story makes me feel so giddy. it makes me giddy because its a real rarity seeing zelgadis working his ass off for amelia's attention...i like that change - let the men do the chasing, hehehe.

anyways, good chapter once again but there's one thing i don't understand: who falls asleep naked on the grass in a palace garden where said person KNOWS there are guests staying there who could be peaking. i mean, doing it alone in your backyard is one thing...er...maybe thats a little risky too - but i know, i know, it's all for the purpose zelgadis' lust and it of course, adds to the affect. yes, you've probably got yourself more than one review stating this and i think we can let it slide. because, well, this is a really good story.

yees, and lina and gourry had better come back soon.

its ok, but cud haf more action, write more!

-Tenma Koneko

Lovely story. You're doing a wonderful job of conveying the characters’ emotions, all the angst they're feeling is just pulling at my heartstring. I can't wait to read more. _

THAT was so good... Imean it was done prefectly with all of the writng and everything... Zels new obsession over Amilia and her unsure ness, Xel's feelings... great! Can't wait for next chapter

wow...another great chapter. You write in such a way that its hard to guess what would happen next.

A short chapter, but very enjoyable. I really adored your description of Amelia's writing fervour. I like that she's using writing to get some clarity and the words you used to describe that scene painted such a clear picture in my mind of what Amelia was attempting and what she was feeling.

The Zel and Xel scenes were excellent to. You have a way with getting into your characters minds and expressing their emotions very clearly. I'm anticipating the next installment.

This story is definitely going on my favourites list. Yes, there is a tad of what might be considered OOC, but it's in a good way. You gave reasons and introspection and made the OOC reasonable and believable. You style of writing is so smooth, it just sucked me right in to the story. I've reread this twice, and I'm still not bored with it. I can't wait for more!

I love you used the song from Moulin Rouge, it gave it a dreamy sequence that was compelling. I could hear the song in my head. Does Amelia remind Xellos of a lost love, is she the reincarnated persona of someone he had loved so long ago *sighs* I know people are rooting for Zel, but I'm going for Xellos here. Keep up the great work hun, you are a wonderful storyteller.

Very good! I hope to read more soon!

Very compelling story. I love how you describe Wolfpack Island. Your description makes Wolfpack Island sound so ominous. I can't wait to see if Zel does get Amelia back or not. Also can't wait to see how Amelia fits in with Xellos' human memories.

OOh, I really like your description of Wolf Pack Island. The idea of Xelloss having human memories is very interesting as well. A lot of people have mentioned OOC-ness, and, while I don't think that the characters would have necessarily done the things that they've done in this story, I do think that it's within their character; I think they're probably capable of doing it (with a little push, perhaps).

Wonderfully, detailed story thus far. I remember seeing this earlier, deeper in the bowls of the Slayers ff section and thinking that it was a story that had tragically died. I'm so happy that you've chosen to continue.

Yes, everyone is a touch OOC but how can a good story be told save through the eyes of the author? (*ahem* translation: This story is awesome don't change the tone just because some people think OOC is horrible) I really love the feel you're generating in your word choice. Sad and hopeful in the same breath. Especially impressive since english is not your primary language. (could have fooled me)

There are so many twists that could be added to this, I can't wait to see where you will take it. Will Zel win Ame? What will happen when friction increases between Xellos and Zelgadis?