This was brilliant and hilarious.
I know that this was made before I was even born, but the way it's written is just a borderline of an weaboo and a canonxoc fangirl Mary-Sue.
The many martial arts and self defense Mary has learned was funny, but when she spewed out those Google-Translate attacks, I had to stop and just bawl out in uncontrollable euphoria. Especially since her name is Mary.
The vegetable state turned into powers was pretty nice, but I love how quickly she, not only got ahold of her powers, but overpowered Virgil. I've never watched the show, but I know enough of it to see the differences.
5/5.

Bet you haven't recieved any reviews for this in a couple of years. The beginning was kind of corny but by the third chapter I saw vast improvement. You should really think about rewriting this and starting it back up.

lol.

I loved this fic! And for you people waiting for another chapter, I think that's it. Because the author already wrote another fic with her called "Burnt Out Memory". No wonder when I was reading Burnt Out Memory I asked myself who the hell was High Voltage, lol. Then I read this 1 and found out that it was your own character. She's a pretty cool character. Finsih Burnt Out Memory and keep writing cool fan fics with High Voltage in them.

-_-; *sigh* I can't believe no one has picked up on this before. Sorry to be the one to break it to you... but...
This is obviously a Mary-Sue. I mean, all the signs point to it. Stylish... good-looking... friends with characters from the show... rich... gets super-powers... teams up with the original characters... bad-girl additude... nearly undefeatable... you've even got some angst thrown in, to try and give it a bit more flavor. But it didn't work.
You have potential, and could become a good writer someday. Or are right now; I have no idea what the latest thing you've published is. But please-
Give up the Mary-Sues.

I hope you don't mind if I really critique your story. I'm only picking on it 'cuz I like it. :)

You're really good with dialog, but the pacing is really messed up otherwise - take some time to describe what's going on when people aren't talking. Like in this part:

"Static watched as High Voltage went off on Hotstreak. She was pulling moves you'd only see professional martial artists do. Kicking and punching and doing combos. She then grabbed him by his throat with both hands."

This paragraph would have been waaay more interesting if you had taken the time to *describe* what happened. You could even have pulled out some martial arts vids for reference. Instead of telling us that she did some martial arts stuff to him, you could have written: "Then she whipped around and kicked him in the head" or something. Basically, what I'm saying is that you should show, not tell.

Keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Would you please add a new chapter?

I think you might've gotten some of those Japanese thingies wrong really. But then again.. I speak very very very VERY little Japanese. I know that that 'Hotstreak wa desu doko ka?' or, something like that meant though. I watch a ton of Ranma 1/2 and Ryouga's always saying "yadda yadda DOKO DA?" because he's always lost. It means 'Hotstreak, where are you?' well, only if you wanted to make sense. if litarally translated it'd sound weird.

But I liked this fanfic, the idea of Static having a partner is funny, and this explains the other fic of yours I read that I didn't bother reviewing because of my terrible internet connection as of lately.

:) That was kewl. Ya gotta feel bad for Mary though, on the other hand, who _don't_ you feel bad for in this story? hehe Good job! Keep it up! _

I like. It's good to know people write fanfics for this show. Keep writing.

Great Job! Keep posting! Please?

~StormyWolfBowler~

make another chapter!

haha shubdubbubdub... uhh i mean funny err sphinx means.. funny.. yeah.. umm.. write more..-nervous laugh- bye now!

Great! Post some adventures soon! I'll be waiting!

~StormyWolfBowler~

cOOL! Write more write more! It's like no cliffhanger thingys! write more pwease it's good! -waves her customary flag-