So why was penny moving away in chapter 7?

Aww, very cute. Leonard trying the bad-boy look? *facepalms* Oh dear. Nice interpretation of the prompt. I'd want Sheldon, too. _~

sweet little story Leonard as a bad boy humm no

This is really good and I'd love to see it as a longer story.

DW

great chapter as always and it has to be P/S every time

great chapter but we'll need to stop this thinking about getting back with Leonard

Hey, every bit of writing is worth doing, even if it's not a long separate fanfic. It's good practice to imagine how different characters think. :) This chapter was a nice insight the S/P relationships as it is right now in the show - Penny getting annoyed, and both of them having little in common to talk about. Those are a couple challenges fanfic writers have to think of how to overcome!

great chapter as always but was this P/L P/S or both?

Great chapter I could see Sheldon and Penny getting into this

I also really liked chapter 5 about baby Marie very nice.

As for your next outting I would stick with S/P with the others on outside but your the writer.

another great chapter you have to feel sorry for Leonard at times

any more please

Yes, Sheldon's point of view would be fun to see! Personally, I find Penny sooo much easier to write. It's hard to imagine how a whackadoodle thinks :)

hi very nice short and sweet (a little like Penny)

well done and yes Ithink it would go one more chapter

yes it's getting there more please and a little longer if pos'

nice start but please keep going