This was damn unholy fire! Amen! I found nothing wrong except one thing...more chapters are missing! Naraku is sexy guilty pleasure and he looks like a really passionate insatiable lover and you captured it perfectly. The ending scene has me hoping inuyasha gets gutted by someone. Lol

Honestly, I absolutely adore your writing style. This story hasn't gotten the attention it truly deserves. You are one amazing author.

Lmao this was a great short story.

So very wonderfully written. I love this couple.

OMGGGGGGG thank you this fic is awsome

Wow. Hot and steamy! I like it!

Good story, well written. :3
I like the way you have set up their relationship.

This is really...enticing...

Lov it

"We haven't tried it in the garden yet" Naraku you horny little spider. Damn this is hot you are an amazing writer and lemon writer, thanks I love the Naraku/Kag pairing thanks this keeps my addiction for this pair appeased (_)

Raven

I honestly teared up at the end!

lol at the ending

i love it cant wait for more!

Holy crap. It is HOT IN HERE! Wow! you've managed to not only write one of the most amazing lemon stories I've read, but you've also managed to write a really emotionally touching story as well! It's really beautiful.

I really liked that last scene you wrote between them. I can imagine how hard it would be for the two of them to say "I love you", especially to each other. And I don't even want to think of what they'll do when the time comes to fight!

And honestly, I'm not GOING to think about it. Because with this story, that's not the point. The point is the love, however dark it is.

I don't know how there are only 3 reviews so far... its such a cute... hot... story... Hope there's more and regardless of the lack of reviews... i believe you should not get disheartened... you write quite good, it reminds me of the erotic romance I've read ... keep up the good work :D