This was such a great story and a puzzle piece that fits perfectly into John knowledge of Ashley's birth.

Wow, that was awesome. I love John's mind, the way he plots and how his curiosity and desire for Helen drives him. This is a very good piece, congrats!

Aw, i really enjoyed that. Sad it ended, but it was very sweet, and i liked seeing how John would of reacted on finding out that he had a daughter. :) :D

Enjoyed it, well done.

Very, very nice. Would love to see more? Hint, hint? Excellent story!

And here is the promised review.

Beautiful story. Beautifully written, as always.

I always love how you truly show John's emotions, the duality in him and the fact that most of the time Jack is dominant in him but that sometimes, John comes forward. You really show that it always has something to do with Helen which I think is great. The fact that, even in his madness, John obsesses with Helen is really good too. We've seen it in the pilot and I wouldn't expect anything else. I liked that John knew her well enough to know that, even if he couldn't find her anywhere in the world, there was always this place they shared where she would come back, even if it wasn't out of nostalgia or anything of the kind.

I love the parks in London so I couldn't help but love all the descriptions you gave. They are so simple yet so strong and accurate. And again, your story gave me an idea. So thank you very much for calling my muse back.

And well, I think I'm done. The main idea of this review is that this is a great story but it's so much more interesting to write that with explanations. Still, I'm going to say it : great story! :D

Hope you post more goodies for us to enjoy, soon.

Take care,

Cécile.

You know what? Despite it being quite creepy and stalkerish, I also found this piece incredibly sweet. But I'm aware of how that could be just my shipper wishful thinking lol.

Anyway, I felt like this was a prequel of sorts to what takes place in the webisodes, so this is what I imagined it to be, and it works perfectly! Also, I think you did manage to get into Druitt's mind and write his point of view so very well. Great job!

Great oneshot and really well written. I was all 'Awww' until the end when the rage kicked in and was reminded - psycho!