Really hope you come back to this one day

This is really really good i love Ur characterisation of misa so much

love this update!

Such a great start to a story and I'm sad to think will never be finished! It was hard to find good deathnote stories about Light and L where they remain so perfectly in character (even if the plot is completely different). If you ever decide to revisit this story (cause it's never too late haha) then I would happily read it and gush about how much I live your writing. Thanks for sharing what you did though!

Aw damn I love this story! Please update!

Aw, this story is awesome. Its interesting, and i've not seen one other like it. I wish you would continue, but oh well its an amazing story anyways, and worth the read even so :D

Omigosh this story is absolutely amazing. Give me more, please.

Hahaha, I am think it is completely awesome how you brought us to this point of unresolved sexual tension in five chapters. Thank you for the update, I hope the series and your story draws your interest again one day so you can pick up where you left off. Thank you for keeping your work up and thank you for writing. I laughed when Light said please tell me you're not hitting on me. I am totally enjoying how Light and Miss keep in touch and how the Kira movement has escalated. I still don't know how to deal with homeless people myself, it easy to smile, give food or money when I am walking by, but when someone is seated at a traffic stop is still there after I greet/give them something, it feels awkward.

Getting to watch L and Light interact was fun, this was an enjoyable chapter highlighted by their dynamics.

Ah L, and our infuriating man. Also, Light's masks, I would definitely like to see an example of such a thing because right now, it just sounds super creepy lol

This is such a brilliant conception, adaptation of the series into this Light as a graffiti artist who keeps his name and admirers, wonderful execution. I am loving your characterizations of Light, Sayu, Misa, Watari, L and Light and Sayu's mom. Misa especially because I am fond of an intelligent Misa, and her interaction with Light brought a smile to my face. Also Watari being aware of Kira and it coming off as almost teasing L made me laugh.

I think this might genuinely be the first time I've liked a portrayal of Misa, including in the canon!

Can't wait for more!

I'm pretty sure this won't be updated but I wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this fanfiction anyway. And just in case you're still reading your reviews: have a nice day!

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