Reviews for Pale
CaliforniaDreamin03 chapter 3 . 6/19/2017
What!? not finished?! aww I'm gonna cry forever! please finish this story! It's so good, well written and in character! I was enjoying it so much! Please please pretty please with 2 cherries on top! Great great writing!
29th.spirit chapter 3 . 9/2/2015
I'm really devastated that you did not complete this fic! So far this one was your best one yet! I loved how you wrote Ulquiorra! Please please please come back and finish this!
nipnag chapter 3 . 3/30/2014
This story is so good! I believe that your understanding and writing of Ulquiorra is the best out of all the stories i've read (and i've read a lot) it's really a pity that you are not continuing this :(
Mikami Yuriko chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
Ah...this was amazing. Some grammar errors in the earlier chapters but nothing that distracts. I wish you'd continue. I love how you've written Ulquiorra. Very plausible. And Orihime is just toooo cute.
JamIsMyCupOfTea chapter 3 . 12/30/2011
luv :) more please!
Karoimirth chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
...You're not updating this, are you?

Anyway, I really loved this fic *favs*

The characters are very in-character and you can totally feel the emotion in the words. Oh and Aizen scares me :P

And I will be hopefull and subscribe T_T
99999 chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
plz update soon, loved ur perspective regarding ulquihime... good luck
ulquihime4evr chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
please continue writing invadia i love reading it please update soon:)
Kitty85 chapter 3 . 10/12/2010
Hoooly shit, this fic is intense. I love it, I really love it. So far, it is one of the most intriguing captivity fics I've read. I love how you've incorporated canon and non-canon plot points so flawlessly. Ulquiorra and Orihime are both quite complex, mature characters and I love that. Chapter 3 was great as I felt it really began moving things forward; from Aizen's words hinting at future events (do I sense a bit of future irony occurring?) to Ulquiorra's change in feelings; his anger and confusion; moving things forward in terms of his development. I feel the fic is going very well and I absolutely love the 2nd person perspective. Do not stop writing this fic, I need to know the ending. XD
Nicky Eira chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
this was a really good chapter! I absolutely loved aizen's explanation for why he choose ulquiorra. You really got into ulquiorra's characer there, rght down to his shoe size XD amazingly in character everywhere, and the ending was dramatic, sort of like the manga itself.

Great job, I'd love to see more of this. And I've never been a supporter of this pairing! So thank you for tilting my mind a bit more in favour of it ]
blackwingsgreeneyes chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
*gasp* my poor Ulquiorra just got b**** slap! *spbs* oh well poor Ulquiorra, your so confuse about the heart :(
blackwingsgreeneyes chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
i love Ulquiora's pov, its well written :) and omfg aizen knew? things are getting good
blackwingsgreeneyes chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
i really liked this chapter, it was interesting
IceFire Dragon Alchemist73 chapter 3 . 9/29/2010
Oh ulquiorra when will you learn.
nypsy chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
hmmm, in this au i wonder if prolonged exposure to hime will change arrancar, like close the whole? maybe aizen suspects this & is using ulqui like a guinea pig? he's doing something...
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