This is great!

I like your Stevie and Smithy, they have a great rapport together and are lots of fun to read about! Neil and Grace are sweet too, but it's S/S my favourites :D

Great! Update soon xx

Powerful, emotional fabulous writing. I just want to wrap Neil up in cotton wool - or Grace's arms - and make everything better. I like how you have Grace and Pippa getting on, and I also like the relationship you have between Pippa and Neil.

Thanks for writing and posting, and if poss, please update soon.

C

Didn't drop a bombshell. Great writing as usual, love Stevie and Smithy reacting so differently to Callum teasing them!

I feel so sorry for Neil and Pippa, that must be bloody awful!

Please keep updating! :D

You have finally updated, that is brilliant-IF YOU WERE THE SLOWEST TORTOISE IN THE WORLD! I have been nagging you through my fanfics to do it earlier. But it is good that you have finally got round to it. :)xx

that was great :)

please update soon x

very gd :) x

I hope Jake's alright!

Is Smithy allowed to go on shift if he's drunk?

Loving this fic, keep up the good work.

This is great! I hope little Jake is going to be ok! Can't wait to read more xx

Love Love Love. It's brillaint, well done, carry on with what you are doing.

That was great :)

Please update soooonn xx

I love the way you write Smithy and Stevie!

Please update soon or i'm sure there's a pitchfork handy...

:D

So much fun, and I am dying to know what Neil thinks of Grace's declaration, and then you go and throw a spanner in the works with poor jake taking a turn for the worse.

Eek! I hope they leave Neil alone now, so he can deal with it, and they let Grace be there for him without giving him - and them - any stick!

Great update, can't wait to find out what happens next.

C

Great chapter. Very cute.