Will you continue your story? Please! What a cliffhanger! Crazy Nettie. Poor nurse Anna.

Enjoying your story. Am surprised that Jasper suddenly felt so energetic when Peter and Charlotte arrived. It seemed he could barely move earlier. And Jasper is different in your story, that he still is uncomfortable at times with the Cullens, and seems to have better feelings towards Maria.

This is awesome! I love

Please update! Dying to know what happens next.

Please finish this story its sooo good and i really wanna know how it will end

PLEASE UPDATE!

I neeeeeeed this story to continue. It’s so amazing, I read it pretty much in one sitting and I’m devastated to find out it’s incomplete. Pretty please let us know how the story ends? Thank you so much for this amazing story!

i cant believe i read all of this without realising it was incomplete omg. can i just say, this is amazing. its well written, carefully considered and actually enticing. the problem with a lot of fics in this fandom is that authors get lost in characterisation, but i can honestly say that you have absolutely nailed it.

Every character's actions actually make sense, and i am loving all of them. Jasper is written perfectly, so is everyone. Like im loving the detailed interactions with each character, and the thought behind every action made. Acknowledging rosalie and jasper as twins and what that means for them. and furthermore exploring the relationship that exists between jasper and Carlisle just makes me so excited to read more of your writing!

also what a cool idea for a fic! youve managed to create a believable illness for character that are supposed to be indestructible which is amazing

thank you so much for writing this fic i am a huge fan, its really well done!

Okay, I just hope that you'll update soon, but considering the long time...
Anyway, this stories gave me chills as well as heart attacks (both in a negative and positive way). The idea was very creative, although some plot points were a bit strange (sometimes even ridiculous). But I'm afraid I didn't like the character portrayals. There were just too many out of character moments. But I really have to give you credit for the character studies of Jasper, which were quite interesting to read and which got me thinking.
So, I guess that I half love and half dislike this story. :D

Update soon please! PLEASE!

I so hope you decide to finish this story some day

Shame you didn't complete this story. it's a good one ;)

ARE YOU LEGIT I GO THROUGH THIS STORY FOR 19 CHAPTER AND THE GRAND SLAM DOWN DOESN'T EVEN HAPPEN OH MY GODS I LEGIT CANT DEAL

Great story. Very interesting. I think my fav chapter was peter's point of view.

I didn't get it