What a wonderful story!
It's so involving, I have truly loved it, I couldn't stop to read it until the very last line!
You sure have a gift about writing!
Lilly and Scotty are so sweet together, good thing they finally found out they love each other! They make a perfect couple! 3

(Excuse me for my rough English, I understand it, but I'm not good at writing in it… I'm Italian…)

i love this story you did a alsome jod

It was well done!

Good story. I liked it. :)

What happened to Tess?

That's gotta be the stupidest criminal ever! LOL

I still think Tess is dead.

Can't wait for more.

good chapter... cant wait to see what comes next

Update soon!

Update soon!

Hope Lilly can find Scotty but I have a feeling Tess is dead.

This was good.I liked it. Want to see what she does in the next. Hope for sonner update. :)

keep up the awesome writing

Aaahhh... I don't know about this one... Perhaps I've watched too many detective/crime shows.. LOL

But then, she did somethings she shouldn't have done alone in some episodes.

But then, I'm writing a story about someone going after Lilly and hehe, she doesn't say anything to the boss for one week till he finds out.

But can't wait to see what Lilly does next.

Aw! Like this chapter. For the next don't kill Scotty and Lilly, please!

Awww.. that's nice that Lilly gives Christina a chance.