THIs was so cutE! I loved it!

Ah, brotherly love. Congrats on finishing the fic! :D

Oooooh, I'm so excited! Awesome story, can't wait till the next chapter!

Glad to see Faramir is okay...

I think Faramir spoke BOTH in his mind and out loud:)

Can't wait to see what happens! :)

good story can't wait for the next chapter I am guessing it's Denethor

very good chapter, I'm really glad Faramir is ok!

as for guesses, I'll say it is Their Father, coming to see if he is ok?

I hope i'm right, looking forward to the next chapter in this really good story!

Happyday girl

:)

Hmmm...behind the door...Denethor? Oh! Gandalf? That's my final answer:)

Urm...the content of this chapter was good, but you REALLY need to have someone proofread your work. Even if it's just reading the chappy a couple of hours after you've written it so you have fresh view on it. I understand about being anxious and all and everybody makes mistakes but a lot of yours are very simple and avoidable:)

awww loved this chapter, and i loved your poems, they really did fit :)

please update soon, i would love to know what happens at the end of this story!

please continue this!

great story so far!

happyday girl

:)

ahhh will Faramir be ok?

loved this chapter!

onward!

happyday girl

:)

bad Indad-he's so mean to little Faramir!

oh my god is the small body faramir? O.O i really hope note!

great chapter!

happyday girl

:)

yay, seven year old Faramir is clever!

can't wait to find out what happens next!

onward...

happyday girl

:)

ooh this sounds interesting!

i'm off to read the next chapter!

happyday girl

:)

The poems were fine. Don't be so hard on yourself. Writing poetry is no walk in the park...unless you are Edgar Allen Poe...*ahem* anyways, a few punctuation errors and some spelling...(i.e. "know" when you meant "knowing" and "presents" when you meant "presence") but all in all not a bad chappy :)