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Guest chapter 3 . 4/21 ️? ️. . . ️ ️ ️. P.S : This is a code. The pictures tell you what I said. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21 Look dude, I know you have rights to stop the fanfic or not, but these people have been waiting for YEARS. At least let them know what is going on. But if you're just gonna keep their hopes up forever, then I'm calling you a shitty jackass. ️️️ |
LYODA chapter 2 . 5/28/2019 Deberías continuar el fic :'( |
Hayoen chapter 1 . 11/24/2018 Yasssss NaruFuu :] |
StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 6/13/2018 Cool 3 chapters continue please. |
Rebellious54367 chapter 2 . 3/2/2016 Name- Raito no neko or Yoake no nami Age- 15 Appearance- Dyed Purple hair, has red and blue shirt and speckles of white, glasses (worn out), right hand in bandages, Nin-Cat by side, Dark Blue Trousers, Navy Blue Jacket, black sneakers, war fans Personality- very hot headed, likes to cook, wants to one day become a medic, grumpy (but only when angry a little), non-pervert (thank goodness), loves to read, smart (from going to the library a lot), cheerful, hates the out doors (well actually doesn't have any spot for nature), gamer Jutsu affinity- Wind and Water Release, Bloodline: Ice Release Known Jutsu- Ice Release: Snowman Defense Jutsu, Water Release: 1,000 x10 Liters, Wind Release: Wind Slash of the War Fan Rank: Genin His family, a disant relative from the Yuki clan, moved to waterfall during the Mizu civil war. After feeling like they needed to retire, they settled in Waterfall. A couple years later, his parents died leaving him in the orphanage all alone. Then after one random beating he unlocked ice release. Something thought only to come from direct Yuki desndents. After flunking and becoming a ninja, he became part of Team 10 of Waterfall. |
Kazekarol sama chapter 1 . 1/21/2016 O queeeeeee!? |
randomreader chapter 3 . 10/9/2015 Great job keep up the good work. I know this is asking alot but can you try to make the chapters longer. I think it could help you in the future |
Eggheadcobra chapter 3 . 11/2/2014 The story started off a little too quickly, but it has lots of potential. I hope to see more of Naruto's relationship with the rest of the jinchuriki, and I also hope we get to see how the jinchuriki assembled before meeting Naruto. Please, for the love of god, don't write the Zabuza arc. It's a huge waste of writing and reading, plus we all know how it goes, so we don't need to know again. Focus more on what the other jinchuriki are doing while Naruto and his team go through the arc. I'm interested in who Han is chasing, Yugito and Bee's relationship, and Fuu's days with her team. Please don't write the Zabuza arc. Also, this is a little personal thought, but I'm a huge fan of Naruto X Fuu, and I hope they develop a great relationship, and we get to see more of them. |
Please update chapter 3 . 10/13/2014 UPDATE |
DevilJinSarutobi chapter 3 . 4/1/2014 It's a cool story idea to bring the jinchuuriki in to help Naruto early on without overpowering him in the setup of part one. Just don't bash the rest of the characters and allow everyone else to grow as well. Question, I am confused and this has bugged me to why Yagura couldn't break out from Obito/tobi control with his tail beast? But then again, in canon that may have been due to poor communication and teamwork that led to his end. |
RheaEllace chapter 2 . 11/27/2013 It has been two years...im waiting for an update... |
Syafiq chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Pls update this Story it is very good |
jonathonribbens chapter 3 . 2/23/2013 this is going to be a good storie i can tell |
MO chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 I like very much about your idea of a Jinchuuriki alliance and pairing up Naruto and Fu together! |