whoa this is SOOOO good

Please continue this! It was wonderful, and then it just stopped!

Is the story on permanent hiatus now? I hope not...it's really exciting!

Hi there! I wanted to tell you I am enjoying this story, and granted it's been a while since you have added to this, I hope you do continue! :-)

Hi,

I've read your story and it is grat )

I like Freddie at most, but he is a really poor guy :/ I pity him... But I like him xD

I looking forward to a continue of that story )

regards

Arawn

This is actually a very good continuation! I'm enjoying it a lot, and I'd love it if you continued! A lot of continuation stories are really... well, dumb. And they have no plot, no twists, and this one has plenty. I know you haven't updated in almost a year, but please do?

when are you going to keep going? this is a fantastic story!

I'm very sad this hasn't been updated in quite a while! I really got into it! If it isn't too much trouble, I really think you should continue it! I absolutely adore it!

Please update :) it's been great so far!

It is pass december 1. So quick question, when are you going to finish? P.S. I love the story, great choice of words to show the character's point of view!

AHEM AHEM this story leaves me wanting more... can i please get some more of the story?

it was fantastic!

I've just finished reading this story, and I have to say I'm really enjoying it (sorry that wasn't very constructive!). Hopefully you'll be updating soon!

VERY interesting turn of events. Nicely done :-) I can't wait for more!

Awwww, Freddie actually has a heart.

This is amazingly written. It's perfect Freddie. LOVE the cliff-hanger ending. Can;t wait for more!