Cute :3

Awesome, good job!

sooo cute! I love it when they're together. :D

Wow. Just...wow. I'm trying to write a Ivan fic myself and needed to look at few Ivan fics. I'm glad that I chose yours first because I think this one is the only one that I need to see how Ivan 'operates'. He sounds completely in character.

But other than the awesome Ivan, this fic is just as awesome as well. There were no mistakes (none that I noticed anyway, being a grammar freak) and everything just flowed perfectly.

Again, the story was just awesome.

cool story stayed up til 2 am to read this.. i noticed theres not that many gretel harvest moon grand baazar storie so i was glad i got to read something good and cute... awsome story

Okay...One word... AWE!

It was cute. Nice job. :3

Wow. That was really nice. I'm currently playing Grand Bazaar and am going for Ivan (can you believe that there aren't any rival marriages?), so this fic was really sweet for me! Thanks for the wonderful read!

Ohhhh! Wow! How wonderful! You are a great wrighter! 333 Felt so real and ahh! I LOVED IT! Keep up your awsome work.

Oh my goodness, this was so cute! I loved it! Ivan is such a sweetheart, and I think you captured him well. And yeah, if I were Anita I'd be pretty insecure with someone like Freya around, too. Anyway, my brain is too busy gushing at the adorableness to think of anything constructive to say. I think you did a good job of capturing her insecurities and some of the little things you added in there (like with the dog-eared books) gave it more depth.

Also, that part with Ivan falling in the river killed me. But I can see him doing that. He always looks like a dreamer. I seriously have to go Wifi to see this comment myself.

Great job!

:D sooooo cute :3 this is my third time reading it, its so good!

I really enjoyed this! As far as I can tell, you got Ivan's personality down to a T. I also really like how you portrayed Anita. Everyone was very in-character. I tend to be picky when it comes to reading fanfiction (I'm kind of a grammar Nazi), but I had no difficulties reading your story. Everything flows nicely and you have great grammar and sentence structure (a lot of people don't, actually o_O;). I urge you to write more for Ivan/Anita if you want and have the time to do so. There isn't enough fanfiction for them, and you do such a lovely job. Thanks for the excellent read!

This was my first Ivan and Anita fanfiction and I had to say I loved it! You have a great writing style!

I also loved how you showed the insecurity that women feel during a relationship. It's a welcomed departure from the overly cheesy stories that I have read in the past.

Overall it was worth staying up to read

Sooooooooo Cuuuuuuuuuuuuute~! I really liked reading this. I'm all warm and tingly~ 3

You've got him down, don't worry -is married to him-. Good job, by the way!

This was such a cute story! I loved it! Ivan is so nice! Great job on the story! :] I hope that you write more stories!