I've read this now numerous times and each time if find it more delightful than the last. There is always some new bit a nuisance that hits me and I adore that. Keep up the great writing. Don't stop believing

Beautiful writing, loved it!

Awwwww! PLEASE write more! I LOVE your work

awesome i want my summer to be like this :)

Aw sweet story

two thumbs up:)

Beautiful.

So ... amazing. So lovely, to see the whole thing unfold from Finn's awkward point of view, and the scenes you wrote were just beautiful. Loved it!

Very lovely Finn and rachel piece- i love how you took us through their summer and their time together. Spot on-cant wait to read more. Loving, couply Finn and Rach happiness is what i like to read and this is it.

Baseball? Genius. Breathtaking and stunning.

"he watches her, thinking that if anyone hung the moon, if anyone is responsible for the stars, it's her." poetic and so incredibly beautiful.

Wow, I seriously loved this. Your writing of Finn was WONDERFUL, and I really enjoyed every single scene. It was funny, romantic, angsty, smutty, adorable whenever it needed to be, and I really really enjoyed it!

Awesome job :)

Wow.

You should write more fan fics like this one. That was good, really, REALLY good. The characters are the same as in the show, their innocence, their character...everything.

Are you planning to write anything else? I hope so! :)

I really liked this story, you stayed true to the characters and touched on some issues I don't think the show will explain

That was so good! You should make more Finchel stories! :)