Love it.
Please write more soon.

Love it.
Please write more soon.
Wow and yay for this story.

I nearly jumped out of my seat when you updated! XD

I'm still liking! This is great! But I just don't like Shute turning Gundam 3

It'd be fun seeing him being the only human there, and going through stuff with Captain as usual X3

But its still good!

Well, that certainly took me long enough. Sorry for the late review! I only managed to get into my e-mail to see the update notification *just* today. :P

I like the dialogue bit with Sazabi and the squadron leaders in the begining. It's not too often that you get to see character devolpment with all four of them in the same room, methinks. That, and I thought the flashback was a great insight into Captain's past. I'm really getting into this ficclet and I'm looking forward to where you could go with this.

Waitaminute... "the other four" Gundam Force members? I have a feeling I know who you're refering to, but I won't leave potential spoilers in case new readers come along. Otherwise, can't wait for the next update, hun. :)

~Lady Shockbox

GAH! I can't wait till next chapter! And to see how Shutes taking this! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!*CLings to your feet*

HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS UPDATE? D: WORK YOU SILLY STORY ALERT BUTTON. WORK. RIGHT. NOW. *smashes it*

Well, aside from my (very) rude lateness in actually finding and reading this chapter... Holy. CRAP. D: Captain's a WHAT now? Didn't see that coming. I'm begining to *really* like where this is going. I sense something "epic" in the works, between the whole destruction of Neotopia, the poem/riddle, and Chronos' inability to speak English. I can't wait to see what it is that you have up your sleve this time! :)

As always, can't wait for more. :P

~Lady Shockbox

HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS UNTIL JUST NOW? D:

I *really* like how you set this story up. It certainly reads like it's going to be considerably darker than you last fic (dark is awesome, methinks), and you writing style has most definitely improved in the sense that the imagery is more vivid than your previous story. No lie, the thought of Neotopia as mangled as you described it made me cringe. As horrible as the carnage was, it was described perfectly. The fact that even Zapper Zaku felt horrified seeing the damage has pretty much solidified my point: This fanfic is going to be awesome hands down.

On another note, your suspense is excellent. So good that I'm dying to know what comes next. Looks to me like you got me hooked again, hun. :)

Can't wait to see where you go with this! You're already off to an epic start, my friend.

~Lady Shockbox

WOO! I can't wait until the next chapter!

I love the use of Japanese words! You'r doing great!