3 it!

but i was hoping to see miri with hikaru. :(

and i absolutely hate ying sun! does she love kaoru or is she just weirdly over-protective?

Sigh, I LOVE IT! This was awesomely well written and I can't stop obsessing over the cuteness and drama of it all! Great job! 3

Woo! FANTASTIC story! I'm REALLY sad it's over, but am eagerly awaiting your next masterpiece! Yay! My character won an olympic medal, got married, AND is having a kid! Kyoya is very smart to hide that little black book though... Great story!

Yay! Happy ending for everyone~! Even Ying Sun.

The wedding was so sweet! Hehe... The two of them have to get used to Kiri's new last name now! _

Thank you for making me a character in this story! It was a honor and I loved how you portrayed her!

I love how you wrote a summary on everyone's lives!

And yet another sweet moment by Kaoru and Kiri~! But this time Hikari isn't there to ruin it!

Loved this story! It was cute, sweet, suspenseful, dramatic, and many more! Too bad this is the last chapter... Oh well... Can't wait to see what you come up with next~! :)

By the way... sorry again for the incomplete review for the last chapter... _"

T_T Such a beautiful chapter!

Kaoru came just in time! Kiri

O_o I told you Ying Sun had a few screws loose! She's freaking crazy! Kiri can't die! Hopefully-and I know this is probably a long shot for Kaoru- he'll figure out that she really is in danger and goes to rescue her! Awesome chapter! Your fanfiction writing skills are improving a lot! Super excited for the next chapter!

Oh no! That sounds dreadful! Poor Kiri... How did Ying Sun find this place? How did she know how to do this? Has she done this before?

Kaoru and Miri are soooo close to Kiri that they have a psychic connection! Too bad they just brushed it off...

Kaoru's message was sooo sweet!

Yes! Kiri escaped, but now she got caught again... What? SHE'S GOING TO DIE? How...? What has Ying Sun done to Kiri? She's turned into a monster... a monster wanting revenge...

Once again, you have updated another amazing chapter! There's so much suspense... Cliffhangers are torture! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!

Ying Sun... Her desire for revenge is turning her into a monster...

Kiri really moved out. Poor Miri... Thinking her own twin sister betrayed her...

The date went well. Kaoru's thoughts about Kiri were sooooo sweet!

Hikaru ruined yet another romantic moment between them... I really wonder if that's what he does in his spare time now. Kaoru is busy with Kiri so his new game is to spy on them.

Will that girl ever give up? She went too far this time! Don't hurt Kiri-chan~~~!

Love it! Can't wait for the next!

NOOOOOO! Ying Sun must diiiiieeee!

*sudden mood change* Yay! Kiri and Kaoru went out a again... Why does Hikaru always seem to feel the need to 'find' them during those types of moments?

Poor Kiri though... It must be hard to be separated from a twin for that long...

My character was perfect! Thanks!

Overall, it was a great chapter and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one! Thanks for updating so quickly!

Whaaaaatttt?

I feel bad and everything for Ying Sun now, but she's DEFINITELY got a few screws loose... Now I understand why she's like that, but it isn't an excuse for her to try to destroy Kiri...

Miri is NOT going to be happy when she finds out Kiri is moving. Poor Kaoru is probably going to be murdered... brutally murdered...*shakes head sadly*

But at least he's getting a little less clueless about Ying Sun

Fantabulous Chapter yet again my friend! Can't wait for the next one!

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That's why? Ying Sun's father doesn't seem to be very good... I can see why she does these things to Kiri, but it's still not enough to make it right. Just because people look alike doesn't mean they're the same. And also if you love Kaoru, you should be happy for him!

Also... Kiri's going to run away? Miri will be sooo sad! :(

Especially after she and the others did that, just so Kiri can be happy with Kaoru.

The drama is unfolding! I'm starting to think Kaoru is realizing something is unusual about "Sunny".

That's it for now! Oyasuminasai, onee-chan! _

Yes! ReVeNgE! *maniacal laughter* I really hope Kaoru stops being an idiot before Kiri gets fed up with him... GREAT CHAPTER!

-_- ~Kaoru is so dense... He still can't figure it out...

_ ~Yay! BFFs forever! The power of friendship!

. This review is way shorter than any of my recent ones...

Anyways, love the chapter! I'm reallyyyyyy curious to what the girls are about to do! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh Kaoru, Kaoru, Kaoru... I'm beginning to think he's hopeless... You're fanfiction writing is getting better every chapter! Keep up the great work! I truly LOVE this story! And my character in here is totally spot on! Thanks for updating so quickly!

Reminder: I'm writing this review as I read.

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Phew... It was only a fever. I'm glad. _

Awww... Kaoru was sweet enough to carry you to bed~!

5 hours? That's a long nap!

Why does Kiri-chan not want to see a doctor...?

Hehe! Hikaru ruined the moment again! Does he always spy on Kaoru and Kiri...? O_o

Kiri's afraid of doctors? I wonder why...

So kawaii~! It's just soooo sweet~! .

Everyone's against Kaoru right now... I wonder what he will do next?

O.O B-bite the doctor...?

Yay! Kiri will go to the doctor! All for Kaoru... AWWWWWW! .

Kaoru is still so naive... -_-

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Another amazing chapter from the PenAndInkPrincess! This chapter was so very sweet~! And you know how much I love sweets! XP Keep it up please!