I think that this chapter was pretty weak.
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Oh my gawd you REALLY REALLY need to write more! Good mix of comedy, 4th wall breaking and epic situations. Good work!

Species Unknown.

in the seventh chapter.

*holds up wall* this is the fourth wall, this is what you've done *smashes it with a horizontal blow from a giant hammer from nowhere* (Hurrah for author powers!)

Okay, kickass idea for the next chapter. Simon comes in to help out with the battle. Ends up flying the salamence. How great would that be? But srsly, this bitch has some good stuff going for it, so keep it up!

why cant the characters just live a normal life? ther is always someone who wants to kill them. i, for one, can't figure out why they're getting attacked. it wass a great story up until you incorporated the bad guys into it. now its just ok. i hope this doesnt offend anyone, i just wanted to say this.

Hey an update! Despite how far apart they may be, I still look forward to them due to the sheer randomness. Although this chapter was a little more serious.

Looking forward to more!

-Z

OMG YOU'RE BACK

I find the use of spanish... Amusing.

Logging in is for squares!

Also, why do you use my name? I kno who I am... Usually.

Epic story mate! Please update!

The humor in this chapter is pretty top notch (breaking the 4th wall is always a laugh) and I think things are about to get very good soon. Another cool chapter hope the next one comes out soon!

I dont know what to say about this chapter, it had everything you could expect and more and Rush, man I cant wait to see how this turns out in the later chapters. Anywho another great chapter!

Another awesome chapter!

A great job again. I laughed so hard when Anna punched Rush! I really like all the personalities of all the characters introduced so far and the way Rush keeps disappearing and reappearing is pretty funny too. Overall I really like this story Keep up the good work!

I'm liking Rush more and more! Keep it up man!

Nice second chapter, keep up the good work!