Reviews for The Devil's Heart
kagome midnight fox chapter 15 . 7/26
Is this done?
Nameless Angel 00 chapter 3 . 5/22
Reading the last line I was like ”No, but it does mean Hell and that's just as bad lol"
Guest chapter 15 . 5/11
Please update this its so good definitely one of the best stories here.
BluePythanGirl chapter 15 . 1/12
Please say you're going to continue this. It's so amazing
TvonUchiha chapter 15 . 8/2/2019
I am so glad you updated this story! This has always been my favorite Naraku and Kagome depiction and when I saw that you finally updated it made me ecstatic! This chapter was amazing and now that the jewel has left her body I wonder what will happen to poor Kagome. I can't wait for your next update and I am so glad that you are back. Been following this story for quite a few years. I'm always eager to find out what happens next.
zizi08 chapter 15 . 7/19/2019
Oh my word the suspense is killing me, what happens next?
Queenbrowniecookie chapter 15 . 7/17/2019
please update
Shuue chapter 15 . 7/2/2019
AAAAA - Glad you continued this story! Thank you! Thank you!
Hu Hu Hu... I want a HE for Naraku and Kagome - chan. I absolutely love this pairing, it's hard to find good fanfictions about them but not out of character. Apart from your story, there're: "Frailty", "A Flower In A Spider's Web", "A Spider's Embrace" ( by Mistress Sianna ), "Sleeping with the Enemy", "The Sweetest Retribution", "The Rain" "The Spider and the Butterfly" ( by Like Weiss on Rice ), "The Grand Cross", "The Red String of Fate"... which are my favorite Naraku/Kagome fanfictions.
Sorry for my bad English! / Please continue and finishing this wonderful story!
oshay1000 chapter 15 . 6/24/2019
NNNOOOO! Why did the chapter have to end with this cliff hanger?
Fairy Demon26 chapter 15 . 6/24/2019
It's been awhile since I read this story, so did you always have Sota as her older brother and not the younger brother as he's supposed to be?

Also, you may want to remove the links from the chapter. They do not work as I do not think allows them and kind of break up the flow of the story.

Hope you'll update soon.
BluePythanGirl chapter 14 . 1/5/2019
I know it's been a while but I can't wait for the next chapter
Damaged Forest Spirit chapter 14 . 11/17/2018
I just found your story. I have to say it's amazing. I love it so much! Please tell me that you haven't forgotten or given up on this story. I really really really hope to be able to read more soon.
Carmello7901 chapter 14 . 6/17/2018
I really love the story so far ! The only issue I have with it is that the ideas aren't really consistent. Maybe it takes you awhile before you update a chapter and you don't review your entire story before you hop right in so you will say one thing and a few chapters later there is a different thing going on. There are no big changes by any means but as a reader we read the story and all of a sudden something happens that is contrary to a few chapters prior. As a reader, it is kind of confusing. It might not be a big deal but sometimes its just the little things that can throw off the story. I can't remember all of the inconsistencies but an example is when Kagome got the dress with sango and then only a chapter or two later its like she never got that dress and instead got the dress with Naraku(which I prefer the naraku dress scene) my suggestion is to reread your story and if you want to change how something happens then you should go back to the previous chapters and edit out, add in, or change material. That is literally the only issue I have had. I really love how you have portrayed the characters. For me it is automatically off-putting when I feel like a character feels out of place but every single character you have included in your story fit perfectly! I know you haven't updated in 2 years, or nearly 2 years or so, but I can't wait to see what you have planned for this story next! Keep up the great work !
DeletingDeleted chapter 14 . 2/10/2017
Awesome
lunawolfy chapter 14 . 12/14/2016
Just started reading this two days ago i gotta say pretty good im not big on naraku and kagome pairing but your story has me hooked i snuck in a bit of reading anytime i had time! Update when you can i'd love to find out what happens next
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