XD Caught red-handed!

This is so funny I choked on my on my own spit...
...Yeah... Awkward moment when my dad looked over at me like, 'WTF?'

Byakuya was so in character I could hardly breathe. I could actually imagine all the facial expressions unfolding here HAHA And THE LAST LINE, I loved it. Really :)

This is so FUNNY! I lmao'd at the last line! XD

Love the ending.

This is hilarious. And it flows perfectly, to!

Thevoiceinmyheadtoldmetodoit. I literally almost died laughing because of that one.

And this ends perfectly! I love it!

Hilarious, I loved it and nice job but why didn't you continue it

I loved this! My favorite line from Renji was when he said it was the voices in his head. Hilarious. You captured Byakuya's personality perfectly. It was almost as if I were watching an actual episode of Bleach.

LOL!

..Good question, Renji!

...Seems our Byakuya's being overprotective How cute! *uses Yamamoto as a shield from Senbonzakura*

Some of the one-liners are positively hilarious!Keep up the good work.

OH My Goshies! I love this story! It's so funny and cute. And the characters were so realistic. Not a hint of OOCness. I LOVE IT (again)!

Poor Renji. I must say a laughed through 99.9% of this. That .1% was the description and that caused a chuckle. Very well done. I love that last line. Renji'd be lucky that Byakuya didn't loose Senbonzakura on him just to cover up why HE was there.

This is awesome! LMAO! XD

great story :D

lol it's so funny

OMG! LOL, THAT WAS SOOO FUNNY! GREAT JOB!