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Beautiful

Well congratulations you atually made me cry at this fan fic amazing job!

Not only the best fanfiction I've read but the best story I've read in ages! Nearly had me in tears on the demon island. As I usually don't cry reading stories, getting to that point was an accomplishment.

Love reading this over and over and over again. Never was one to review anything I read all that much but I do love to encourage the authors of the fanfics that take up our otherwise pointless leisure time. Has me emotional every time I read it.

Name: Ryuka
Status: Ongoing Manga, Anime, and Fanfiction Lover
Background Profession: Fanfic reader since 1998.

The dialogue is hard to understand because you say he for Sebastian but you also say he for Grell. I was really confused when you said at some point. "He grabbed his wrist" I thought Grell grabbed his own wrist but he grabbed Sebastian wrist

Don't use Japanese honorifics in an English story. It's annoying and destroys the atmosphere.

I don't even have words to describe how much I adored this story. The fluff, the romance, the drama, and the bit of angst (chapters 15-17, God I bawled my eyes out at those parts) had been a hell of a very satisfying roller coaster ride. I'm a bit bummed with Grell never regaining his voice but at least they still ended up together (and alive, or existent 'cause technically they're not really alive) and lived a hopefully happy life (or death, whatever). So hats off to you. This was definitely a job exceptionally done!

*Giggles* Well isn't Grell a tease?

Please tell me you watched the kuroshitsuji musical! I love red or black x3

Oh my GOODNESS this was wonderful, just a lovely emotional ride! I loved the imagery and depth you have the characters. I think this is my new favorite grellxsebby fics now! It's really quite beautiful it's almost like the black butler romeo and juliet! Keep writing!

I read this story so fast each word and chapter made me want to read on more and more. It was wonderful thank you so much for letting me have the pleasure and joy of reading such a lovely story 3

Zelex

Im so amazed by how the story turned out! I totally love the alternate ending better, it fits perfectly! Your story is awesome!

Aaaaah... I'm crying again .'''

But this time because of Will...

Omg this fanfiction is so good!

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ACK! NUUUUU!

Stupid Will! I really didn't like him anyway, but - even though this is a fanfiction - I hate him now! T.T Grrr!

I remember learning about those things being good against watches years ago! XD Before I even knew what Kuroshitsuji was! Figures that they'd work against demons as well! -

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