These were awesome. I loved the approach you took to these characters. This was very well done!

I think I like Deidre better then her sister

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This is really good. Hope to see another story from you soon!

Nothing wrong with it aside from some factual continuity errors such as Nanna Harley's most of the things feel as if they were shoved in there as they are pointless in a way. I wouldn't call it terrible, but it certainly isn't good.

Interesting take on the DeeDees. Keep up the good work.

It would be interesting for them to meet each other again now.