| Reviews for The Freedom |
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Clanclaws chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 Dawn used Hyper Voice. It was very effective. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2012 aww this is so cute |
Ikari Angel chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 Very good and cute i like it |
LD-2015 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011 sooo sweet! |
mednin chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 Awwww, so cute 3 Thanks for writing this story! :) |
WastinTimeWatchinGrass chapter 1 . 7/7/2011 Very interesting... love it :) Horray for Ikarishipping! |
Oakly12oakly12 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 ZOMG this was... Adorable! Paul & Dawn's moment alone was the best! Eep! XD okay there were minor mistakes but nothing a little review can't fix! XD God I jus loved this! Teehee Misty is one crazy girl with the mallet xD |
DarkAngel chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 Awwwwww...how sweet... Id love a sequel! |
Not An AuthorandReader No More chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 I almost forgot the whole story of this. I was too preoccupied with it that I forgot to review,LOL. So adorably funny! :3 |
IvyBean chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 AWW~~~ LOL AT ASH...poor guy is always hungry XD I love the funny bits and the haunted house thing was awesome! :) AND IT WAS SO AWESHUM THE WAY YOU GOT THEM TOGETHER! CUTE! XD XD I really, really liked this. And delete Kenny...muahahahaha! XD |
ablair24 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010 aww i love it and i absolutly adore your style of writting |
animeloveramy chapter 1 . 9/21/2010 nice! but the i dont think i love you was evil _ even if we knew what was coming! also, you swiched from third to fist person and back again somwhere in the middle and it kinda confused me. i assume it was in dawn's perspective but... |
FluteHero14 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010 Yes...woo! Oneshot. Good. I love how you made things seem pretty real. Darn Ash and his stomach lol. I've always loved the way you add details that I can relate to. Get your other stories updating dess! |
HanaIchi Ikari chapter 1 . 9/14/2010 O/O I am speechless... Why must you make this sound so cute...? TT Now I'm jealous of Hikari! xDD |
CherryOnTop915 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010 Aw this was so sweet :) Did i ever tell you how much i love your storries? If i didnt im tellin ya now! I LOVE YOUR STORRIES! |