you have a good start. I have just finished reading both chapters and I have hope your going to add more. as you may have noticed it is now 2020. Four years since you've written these good chapters could provide many more. I hope this finds you well.

Daryl Gragg, dar54gar61 gmail

This is AWESOME! Please update!

I know you haven't updated in 3 or so years, but I'm adding a follow in hopes you do update soon.

Amazing. I hope you can update soon and that cliffy was perfect

You know you left both of these chapter open like a cliff hanger. It leaves the reader thinking that there will be more to the story like what is Fudges reaction to them being back and things like that.

Good chapter.

gunny

Good start.

gunny

Interesting start, though I wonder when the Potters will realize Dumbledore let all the abuse Jarry suffered happen without lifting a finger.

I know you said this is a one shot (technically 2) but I really want there to be more!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A FULL FANFIC ABOUT THIS! IT'S REALLY GREAT LILY AND JAMES NEED TO MEET RON AND HERMIONE AND GINNY AND ALL THE REST! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T ADD MORE! SURELY YOU WOULDN'T WANT THAT?

Bloody brilliant! Love all around!

Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon.

I like this story. I'm a tad skeptical over stories where the dead return to life, but your's is a delightful exception. The characters emotions were spot on, namely Harry's. Great job!

that was so sweet!your really a great write!can you make another one like this but a series?

This seemed like a really good story but I got halfway through and could no longer continue because you got the dates completely wrong. Harry Potter was born July 31st 1980, Voldemort fell on October 31st 1981, not 1988, he attended Hogwarts from 1991 - 1997 and the summer before his fifth year was the summer of 1995. I read your note that you had yet to have to story Beta'ed but, even so, the dates are such a rookie's mistake. I suggest going onto the Harry Potter wikia, easily found by searching on Google, if you are uncertain about dates, names or places as the wrong information can really ruin a story as it did for me. However, saying that, I think that this could be a really good story if corrected and beta'ed. I hope you don't mind the, hopefully, constructive criticism.