Reviews for Chuck Versus The Abandonment
baldcoder chapter 7 . 4/15/2016
Good story!
Hoju chapter 7 . 1/11/2014
I can dig it.
Hoju chapter 6 . 1/11/2014
Lots of grammar errors. Your storytelling ability needs work. BUT! You tell a good enough of a story to keep me reading.
Maverick41 chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
Great great story!

Sad it's over, but it felt right to end it there. You're a very talented writer.
Maverick41 chapter 6 . 1/20/2013
Loved the part where it said Sarah kissed Chuck on the lips to try to wake him up. The fact that she knew it wouldn't work, but wanted to taste his lips anyways was hilarious.

Such a feel good chapter.
Maverick41 chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
Of course Chuck can't just stroll out, something has to go wrong hah.

Understandable that Chuck isn't mad at Sarah since it's only been a month, and even though Sarah feels guilty, still wished there was a litte more explanation on why she didn't try to find him.

Great chapter and I love that they get to be together.
Maverick41 chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
I have to be honest, well I don't have to, but I will lol. After reading this chapter I was slightly disappointed that the first couple of chapters weren't real. It was brilliant in my opinion and I thought you should have continued with it. I like stories with Chuck in a bunker and there aren't many of them in this site, and your take on it in the first couple of chapters was just so damn good.

Also, maybe it might be answered later on in this story, don't remember, but even though it's only been a month, it kind of sucked that Sarah didn't try to get Chuck out.

Still love this story though lol!
Maverick41 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
This is such a great story. I don't find it depressing at all...ok maybe a little, but it has charah fluff so that's always fantastic.

Ahhh good ole' cliffhanger.

Loved the part when Chuck asked permission to kiss Sarah.
Maverick41 chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Being kept in a bunker even for a short amount of time would prolly drive me insane, let alone a year.

Great chapter as always. It was sad, but not too depressing since Sarah is there now. Of course Chuck wouldn't all of a sudden drop the whole talking to himself thing right away.
Maverick41 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I love this story, but oddly enough I never reviewed. Well here I am reading it again and this time definitely going to show my love by reviewing.

It was so sad when I realized Chuck was talking to himself. Surprised that Chuck is still cooperating, but then again...

Great chapter!
Hotski chapter 7 . 4/14/2012
I never thought I would read this story when it said it would be depressing and yeah the first 3 chapter was a bit though to read without a doubt but oh my god how awesome and sweet wasn't the story in chapter 4 to 7! Yet again a really nice story from you, man, good job.

Gotta say that it was sweet that Sarah just let Chuck whatever he wanted ;)
Tynianrex chapter 7 . 9/19/2010
This is your best story so far. Good work!
Notactiveanymore112 chapter 7 . 9/19/2010
Great job with this one!
NickyR chapter 7 . 9/19/2010
I cant believe that is that time again? I cant wait for tomorrow, thanks for the update and all the charah goodness!
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 6 . 9/18/2010
Loved it! Loved how you drew elements and lines from the seasons too!
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