Glad to know that there's a sequel to Darker Side of Elastigirl. Looking forward to reading the next chapter soon!

That being said, I do have one small issue with this story, and it's the writing format. You wrote it in a way where the alternate universe and the current universe is mixed together, which makes it confusing when you transition from one universe to the next.

I would suggest dividing it in some way, either with an ellipses in the middle of the page, using the big line gives you, or italicizing one universe or something.

Happy Writing!

I wish Bob impregnate Mirage and marry with her! XD

I love it! Please continue to write and update more chapters!

I hate Helen in this fanfiction, but the story is superbly written and believable.
Hope you continue writing.

Are u going to finish the fanfic

Please update soon. I really enjoy this story and it is very well written

love the first and the sequel it was great but to tell you the truth i hate the two characters Kevin A.K.A(~Assimilator~) and Rachel A.K.A(~Agent Zero~) WTFFF those characters were the worst in my opinion no offence though every time i see one of there names kevin or rachel it harshes my mellos of how interesting this great story was well all i wanted to say is GREAT STORY 4REAL :) but please no more kevin and rachel shit PLEASE its like for me ugh doesnt go with the story but anyways keep it up i love this :DDD

I love this please please update !

I think u did a great job on all of ur stories! I hope u chose to continue! (even if ppl chose not to review or leave negative comments!)

where is this going to lead to?