| Reviews for Prince of Persia: Crimson and Shadows |
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  blitz123 chapter 17 . 10/28/2011 please write a sequel to this chapter with an m rating |
 IceyKrystal chapter 19 . 4/16/2011 Ooh very angsty again. Your writing is improving and I am ready for whats going to happen when he fights. oor whats going to happen to Farah when she is all alone without the Prince to defend her. :o |
| demondreaming chapter 16 . 3/14/2011 This is a good chapter. It's got strong character development in it, but some of the emotion, some of the dialogue confused me, some of it seemed to come out of nowhere, if that makes sense. |
| demondreaming chapter 15 . 3/14/2011 Another strong chapter. The ending seemed a little confusing to me, a little ambiguous as to whether Adriant was talking directly to the Prince. Nonetheless, your description is once again quite strong. |
| demondreaming chapter 14 . 3/14/2011 Very nice plot development, and I quite like the relationships you've built/expanded on between the characters. Good work. _ |
| demondreaming chapter 13 . 3/14/2011 This chapter had a good flow, good narrative progression. You're good at writing action, and your description is quite nice. |
| demondreaming chapter 12 . 3/14/2011 This chapter felt a little rushed, and I don't just mean because it's short. Nevertheless, the interaction between the Prince and Farah is quite good. |
| demondreaming chapter 11 . 3/14/2011 This was a strong chapter, but some of the dialogue was a little confusing as to who was 'talking'. Apart from that, quite good. |
| demondreaming chapter 10 . 3/5/2011 Your inner monologue for Farah was quite good, but your description, particularly in the beginning paragraphs, felt a little awkward, a little... clunky, for lack of a better word. |
| demondreaming chapter 9 . 3/5/2011 This chapter flowed quite well, and your dialogue feels natural and appropriate for the characters. The story feels like it's getting properly grounded and established, and it's starting to get quite good. |
| demondreaming chapter 8 . 2/9/2011 The beginning of the chapter feels awkward, but the rest of it is quite good. I'm starting to get into the story, and you're quite good with your dialogue. |
| demondreaming chapter 7 . 2/9/2011 You write action well, and your description is improving. It feels like you started to get a handle on the story at this point. |
| demondreaming chapter 6 . 2/9/2011 Your wording still feels a little awkward. You're being a bit too... elaborate with your words, and injecting some unnecessarily. Other than that, this is a strong chapter. |
| muso-artist chapter 2 . 1/13/2011 im a bit disappointed with chapter 2... |
| IceyKrystal chapter 18 . 1/3/2011 Woot Prince going to be gladiator D a sleepy one though...and whats wrong with Farah? Shes sick? |
