Awesome Sora x Riku one-shot!

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Aw... that was cute. Well, the first half at least, I wouldn't have used the word "cute" for the second one :). A nicely written oneshot, hope you'll write more on this couple.

This was good! :D

so beautiful

i really loved this story~ it was really good
keep up the awesome writing
XD

hey where in the hell is the story?

so great so great so great so great so great! I love it!

Me likeyyy... lolz... Awsome story and even better lemon

.ZING! Thanks for the lemon XD its really a sweet story, With the race and the fruit

Wonderfulllll story! God I think I just had a gay moment!

I enjoyed it. This was a well-done short story. Usually when people do short stories they have a tendency to rush things. You, however, did not and I'm glad. You left the fun for last, which is a usual thing to do but good in this case. There were some errors with grammar and one word I noticed: 'stork' which I suppose was meant to be stroke, I dunno. ; But I enjoyed reading your story and hope you continue in the art of literature! C:

KYAAA!

So damn cute!

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awwww that was cute!