this needs to be finished! you can't end it there!

Dear my favorite clutz,

Oh my gosh I swear if you stop the story here I am going to find you, tie you to a chair and force you to finish.

Love,

Your craziest fan

was wondering if you plan on adding to this story, you have peaked my interest and no I am more curious than ever about why the resort is deserted... I hope that you do pick this one up again like you did with Oh Olivia! Update soon, if you can!

Woa. Great storyline.

What if Broyles didn't arranged the trip?

i can feel it coming. they are about to find out what is going on!

i can't wait :)

Eeep! More please! I can visualize Olivia's shy smile, and Peter's cheshire grin! This is very well written! I can't wait to read more from you!

To hell with Olivia, I want Peter all to myself! ;)

Great job. I love how descriptive you were, it was almost like watching it happen in front of me! Oh, how I wish...

good lord. that was better that his smile!

all night... sigh

:)

hmmm i was expecting to read about their evening but i forgot this is a suspense story!

can't wait to read more :)

another nice chapter.

i especially liked the beginning. i can totally relate to getting up so early & getting ready while you are still half asleep.

:)

i can't believe you only have 12 reviews... so i'm reviewing each chapter :)

nice beginning.

i love each & every mention of peter's smile. it is breathtaking isn't it?

Hi! Very good so far. I'm guessing the medication is some sort of aphrodisiac? ;)

meezergal

When will these two ever learn...

Drinking alchy-hol teh sex!

You know considering that Broyles arranged this little trip, I'm starting to get very suspicious here.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Keep up the good work :)

I can't wait for more! I felt like I was there...and on a cold and rainy October day that is much appreciated! I'm excited to see where this goes.