| Reviews for Ancient Blood |
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   FriggleBerry chapter 4 . 4/15 Honestly the flood kinda ruin the story for me, I think it’s because they are on the same planet as naruto is from. Idk it just puts me off that the flood pop up INSTANTLY no covvies none of that just instantly the most dangerous possible being in the universe is introduced and released kinda kills this for me. Would rather see naruto tear through covenant armies before he head firsts into the flood but whatever it’s a cool story just not for me I guess |
| koseta.a chapter 3 . 9/12/2019 A bunch of these other people's complaints I agree with. Chakra being locked away due to being off planet? Chakra is internal. He's also got a living ball of Chakra inside him spying him with its own unique Chakra. Naruto has little Chakra in your story? How, I mean even if it was 'locked away' he returned to his planet thus it should have returned his massive core. Also how the hell is a mineral supposed to have the same effect of an advanced piece of technology simply because it's an ingreigient (releporting explanation of hiraiashin). That's like you can make a sandwich out of flour (or grain). |
| BrentNewland chapter 3 . 9/8/2019 Also not a big fan of your teleporter explanation |
| BrentNewland chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Not sure I agree with that bit about chakra being limited to their planet and locked away offworld, or about Naruto's planet having different years, but interesting story so far. |
| Some1 17 chapter 10 . 5/14/2019 So how does a sangheili smile they have four mandibles not lips |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/24/2019 Yep |
| SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 12 . 2/11/2019 Awesome chapter keep it up |
| Blandy8521 chapter 12 . 2/9/2019 So from the sounds of it the galaxy is about to be reintroduced to the flood that'll be fun have you considered adding different infections such as Necromorphs or the Locus/Lambert(?) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/19/2018 Dead story? |
| LordMentat chapter 12 . 5/27/2018 Shame this takes so long to update. Its really good! |
| hitmarkerzzzzzz chapter 4 . 3/13/2018 wheres his helmet at u put it in the story but he didnt wear it throughout thw fight? |
| hitmarkerzzzzzz chapter 4 . 3/13/2018 why is he so week if he has that number 18 suit and has all that knowledge into hid brain plus his ability to predict and his training to master the duiy |
| god of all chapter 12 . 11/26/2017 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Edocsiru chapter 4 . 10/4/2017 this is too pathetic.. he has the tech to destroy planets for fuck's sake! |
| Edocsiru chapter 3 . 10/4/2017 little chakra? naruto? yeah right.. what are you smoking? |
