Nicely done.

Very sweet

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww!

Brilliant and original story.

Its very in character actually; even the scenes and the hug at the end seemed something they would do. i think it also captures their bond so well. the issue of whether sosuke comes back or not has always been nagging at their relationship as sosuke is indeed involved in the military. good job to you for tackling that matter very well.

its good but needs to be longer

Wow I really liked your story and it was really true to the way everybody spoke and felt in the actual was only one thing...in the anime kaname's friends name is Kyoko, not Kyoto.

nice!

i love it!

love this story. the story cuts you straight in the heart

As a big fan of Full Metal Panic, I love how you wrote about these two. You've kept Sousuke and Kaname very much in character and the writing flows smoothly. It's so obvious that while Sousuke tries to be normal after being gone for so long, he still was frantic and desperate to see Kaname. I found the ending emotional and sweet. Though it's not a love confession as expected, a promise like that is just as romantic. Thank you for making my night with this, I'm happy that I read this.

Very nice. There are thousands of military/intel spouses who can identify with this one! I like the way he just appears in front of her, stubbornly trying to be normal, but obviously as desperate to see her as she was to see him after several weeks with no word.

Very good FMP story. As you can see, I'm a little interested with Full Metal Panic...eheheheh.

i think this story is great! and i think you also did well in keeping them in character, so don't worry. i hope you'll write more Sousuke-Kaname stuffs like this. :)