I love your job. It almost seems part of the movie!

I love this!

I like it! The ending was very satisfying.

The brother/sister relationship is really strong, but its always creepy whenever it goes beyond that. I think you really stayed true to the characters and the story itself was a nice add-on.

Awww... You gotta love these two characters, really...

Such a complicated relationship I suppose.

Really well done :)

You really did an excellent job on this. Great job!

I'm rather happy. 3 After the movie, which made the twincest completely canon, I needed something like this.

It really does feel like a missing scene, and I like how you portrayed their connection. They are intricately tied together, after all...

Oh WOW! Ur writing is AWESOME! I was in some serious jaw-dropping, love-it-to-death kind of awe when i read this! :)

This was so well written! itz INCREDIBLE!

Bravo!

lots of love

sHiV

I fav this story but didn't read it in detail yet. It has so much reminiscience that it's tragic. "Time and your own hated." should be hatred isn't it? Other than some tiny mistakes , i agree with your portrayal - how they both need each other.

even if she hated him, it is all true.

this is nice! is it considered twincest? awesome.

Excellent piece! why i say this also, becos as long as other people update and have new fics, then a conceited someone won't think she's the only person alive who can write well in this world.

do continue!

loved it:)

and waiting for your next stories.

Wow! I am blown away! I love the atmosphere and exploring how Nuala felt abandoned and Nuada feels betrayed. They are so believable on a sibling level here and you nailed their dialogue! I wish this was a deleted scene on the DVD! Very good job. One for my favorites!