great story

i loved your story

I loved this. So much. It really is incredible. I think you captured the twins really well. Ans the definition thrown in were really amazing. My favorite part is the way you ended the story.
By the way- your definition of love is the same as mine :) Thank you.

Yaoi is love 3 Especially HikaKao! xD

:) really good! XD loved the description of love at the end, was very sweet

Really good! I loved it so much!

I loved this so much. It was really well written. The definition of love you gave at the end sealed it off in the best way it possibly could.

Great work! I hope you write more.

Ooooh! The words on the tv make me happy! (I'm reading this on my wii) very very good writer-person!

I love your usage of definitions of various words and the extended metaphor of the "Forbidden Fruit". I fangirled many times throughout this xD. Cute oneshot, well written.

This is so cute!

I really enjoyed reading this.

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

This was GREAT! You got to write more! )

I just loved how the whole fic was so uniquely framed by the definitions and how the individual parts fit so well with them. :D

It's so adorable! 3

And yes,it's true what you said about love in the last paragraph :]

Awesome oneshot! One of the BEST twincest fics I have ever read. I love how there where definitions of common words that meant so much! love this fic!

*points to story* and that, fangirls of the world, is why I love Ouran High School Host Club...TWINCEST...oh crap FANGIRLS RUUUUUUUUN!But before I run I must FAVORITE .