I’m so sorry for this, and I know that you would rather appreciate a constructive review. All I can do is rumble about your Carlisle and Esme writing. It’s just so well written, like the way how you expressively describe their story is dreamlike. I have no words. Truth is, I have been reading your Carlisle and Esme works over and over. It’s literally helping me cope through uni, please are you considering getting back to writing? For example the time period when Edward disappears or how they dealt with Rosalie.

this chapter is not soo esme types...esme wouldnt be so callous.. she would be against aborting the child but not jealous of bella...rosalie may be jealous of her...this one suits more to rosalie, than esme!

I was drawn into the incredible poetry of your prose. It was such a beautiful beginning. I am a female but, like Carlisle, have found the other gender to be almost a complete mystery. (You wrote that feeling so well!) Unlike him, I have not met my soul mate. Sounds as heavenly in your intro as I would anticipate such a relationship to be.

That was by far one of your bests one shot!

That's brilliant.

Pleeeeease update, I'm having Esme and Carlisle withdrawals!

I miss this story
when will u update?

I know i've been out so long, but Mackenzie, you're still amazing me. Beautiful chapters, dear. Except for Esme and Carlisle, Twilight is over to me. I think it as a phase and not more. But reading some continued story like yours, just made me come back to this fantastic duo. I think Esme and Carlisle will be the only good memory of Twilight.

As always, I hope you'll write something more. They had a very beautiful story and I hope you're gonna writing something about Edward's runaways days. I can feel som much pain and adjustment to our favorite couple.

Thanks again for not giving up on your stories and all the best in 2014.

My best wishes,
Mimilla

Congratulations on your new home. I'm so happy for you.
Keep writing, you're wonderful.

Wow, that was amazing.

wonderful thank you

Loved the chapter. Its so nice to see Esme's confidence growing. It's strengthening her relationship with Carlisle and ultimately with everyone else (once they join the family). Carlisle is always so supportive of her and its nice to see how she was able to support him. She was able to give him strength and encouragement when he needed it. Their relationship has really become a true partnership.

Soo good to see you back! Have really missed your writing! I needed a little C/Es fix! Can't wait to read the next update in Where Angels Roam the Sea! I love that story! Glad to hear things are going well for you! I just bought my first house too so I know your situation all too well :)

wow, another amazing chapter. Your writing is always fascinating to me.

Teehee this story makes me so happy :)