wow. you're really good. even just after reading this and the last little story i read by you...just, wow. you're really good at capturing the characters. this was sad, but the end made me chuckle.

This is strange to say, but that was a really sweet break-up scene. You've really captured the awkwardness between Sarah and John. Her reason for breaking it off was completely reasonable too. I loved the bit of how hanging with Sherlock apparently affects John's reasoning capabilities somewhat. :P And how at the end it just sort of oozed into the 'latest mystery' sort of idea seemed really appropriate for the series. Thanks for sharing. :)

I think this is the most beautiful, simple, sweetest break-up scene I've ever read! So lovely. Great job.