Just cool perfect ending actually love it more... Thnks for the great story

Is there a sequel or at least an epilogue for this? I’m kinda hoping for this one to have an extension . It’s a pure bliss of sweet moment of Natsume and Mikan. It’s just so sweet and innocent.

My fastest mile time was 6:45 but then three years later, 9:30 (")

Awesome story so cute

Who every whote this should white more story I loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much thank you for that and do more please it awesome thank you

LOL marshmallow power!

This entire story is really rushed. I suggest you get a beta-reader to proof-read it. It was still a really intriguing story. :3

I have found lots if grammatical mistakes in .
your work this chapter, for example:
"For a minuet, there was a silence. But I decided to break it."
Minuet is a song, if you didn't know. I think you probably mean Minute.
"Simure asked me if he was hot and I said yeah. "
I think her name is Sumire Shoda.
Please be more careful.

the ending was okay, but I really likes the story line... :') I cannot believe its ended! I feel like crying, such a good story!

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i like it!

You know i like the idea , but i didn'т quite understand the ending , but you know i cry a lot in chapters 27 and 28 . Well it's not perfect but wonderfull so wonderfull

Three words...WOW...after reading this story...I've never felt so nostaligic...like wow...this...is...one of the kind. Teheeee...you should probably write a sequel ya know? It's A Masterpiece...hahahh...I'll be waiting for your next works...hahahahh...sore ja...hehehehhh...

I LOVED THIS ONE SO MUCH! My heart was always like: DOKI-DOKI x) OMG! nice job on this one! I totally love your stories!

i love this story...you have to writte a sequel

i really love this fanfiction soo mucch! i already put this story in my favorite storyy