Reviews for Temptations
Jiyiri Nieme chapter 9 . 6/30
It’s 2020 and I’m still waiting for the continuation of this story, been an Ichihime fan since 2008 and I swear this is the best fanfic I’ve ever read
Orihime-18 chapter 9 . 6/29
Interesting ichihime story..hope this wil be completed :)
Koloina Niaina chapter 9 . 6/24/2018
Thanks for leaving it unfinished again ...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2018
This story is so good. I wanted to read more but your link does not work. It’s a shame you have 19 chapters but there are only 8 posted here. I am a long time Ichihime fan (since 2004) and I was happy when my favorite pairing became canon. Now that Bleach is over, I get my Ichihime fix by reading wonderful fanfic like yours.
Trivena Kuchiki chapter 9 . 5/27/2015
Please come back and continue this! It's really good! Also I have a personal suggestion for a new fic. Could you do an UlquiHime one? It could even be a oneshot. A drabble. As long as it's cute and will make me jump and fangirl in excitement. Don't worry I get excited pretty easily. So please finish temptations and please do an UlquiHime fic. Love the story!
The Lady Ayla chapter 9 . 11/2/2014
Inside Hylla's mind:

Hmmm, this fic is really good. I feel like I could finish the whole of 19 chapters in one sitting.

This chapter seems rather short though...Oh well, a chapter is a chapter.

Let's read...*reads first sentence*...*heart momentarily stops* WHAT?! This isn't a chapter. Just an authors note ;( It might be important so I'll just read it and go on with the story.

Ohhhh, I see. The rest of this amazing IchiHime fanfiction has been posted to your other account. I'll just finish reading it there :)

THANKS A BUNCH FOR NOT DELETING THIS AWESOME STORY!

While I'm at it, I might as well read your other stories too since you're such a good doctor *goes to your other account to finish reading*

...

WHAAAAAAAAAT?! *looks around frantically*

Damn Fanfiction! Why is it saying user not found?

PLEASE! I MUST read the rest of this fic! It is imperative that I finish! Such an AMAZING story CANNOT be forgotten! D:

Please! Can you give me the link to your new story? The link on you profile isn't working either... :O
The Lady Ayla chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
Lol, the little blue men...XD

Orihime is so childish, you can't help but love her even though she may seem a bit ditzy at times. I think its adorable and I'm sure Ichigo does too .

I hope she's okay! You better take good care of our girl, Ichigo ;)

Rukia is going shopping for lingerie with Kiyone...? You must include that scene! It'll be hilarious!

Hahaha, Renji gave in to going on a date with Rukia. He's an online shopping kinda guy, huh? I wonder what tux he'll eventually pick. Whichever one it is, don't decide on choosing the rose printed one XP

Awww, thats sweet! I love how so many archetypes fit Ichigo and Orihime - the Prince and the Princess, the Warrior and the Healer, the Knight and the Damsel... C;
The Lady Ayla chapter 7 . 11/2/2014
OMG that is so kawaiiiii! She fed him Jello from the same spoon .

I was totally right about Isshin secretly setting Ichigo up with Orihime! I wonder who the other man on the phone was. Probably Kisuke XD

Honestly, if I had a doctor like Renji, I'd be scared shitless. He does look kinda menacing but I love him all the same ;)

Dammit! I am on the borderline of becoming a RenRuki shipper. So many ships to ship XD

Great idea with her taking him on a date. Of course she did blackmail him but still (lol, Renji likes Shojou manga)

I can't wait to meet Byakkun! :3
The Lady Ayla chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Rukia and her manga...AWESOME!

And we find out more about Orihime's past...That little girl in the flash back was her, right? It was so sad ;c I felt so bad for the poor girl. Imagine having an abusive father like that *shudders*. No wonder Orihime is always so emotionally strong despite being in so much pain and stress.

I just LOVE Rukia in this fic! You made her so spunky and awesome!

I like the little conversation she had with Orihime C: If her spitting out the water was any indication, she is so totally in love with Renji! I knew they both liked each other and were just in denial ;)

It's cute how Ichigo is so precarious around Hime. Knocking on the door like the perfect gentleman... :P

You're so dense sometimes, Ichigo. Its obvious to everyone around you that you like Orihime. Why else would you feel so strange and nervous around her ;3

I wonder who the radiologist is... Would it happen to be Ishida?

On a side note, this is my favorite chapter so far! Idk why I love this fic so much XD
The Lady Ayla chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Oooooh, Yuzu and Jinta are married! They are really cute together!

I hope you don't pair Toshiro with Karin. I HATE that pairing. The two never even met... :\

If Toshiro makes an appearance in this fic, he should be with Momo. HitsuHina for the win! ;P

Rangiku and Gin...Yay! Totally ship them together :) I hope they go to see Hime... Gin doesn't like the police, huh? I wonder if he is associated with Aizen...

I love the little stories you've added around the main one about Ichigo and Orihime. That's one of the main reasons I like this fic so much! My favorite side-story is the one with Renji and Rukia ;)

Normally when authors include so many characters, they end up messing up all the interactions and stuff. But you manage to pull of writing it all PERFECTLY! I hope more Bleach characters are coming XD
The Lady Ayla chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
Are Rukia and Renji a couple? From what I've read of this so far, I can guess that they both are at least a little attracted to each other. They seem to permanently annoyed but that's probably because they both secretly like each other or something. I don't know if I like RenRuki or not but they sure are growing onto me...Maybe this story will end up making me ship them together ;)

That flashback kinda reminded me of Vampire Knight. You know, the part where Yuuki wonders what snow is...
The Lady Ayla chapter 3 . 11/2/2014
I hope we get to meet Byakuya later ;3

I love how Rukia loves manga! It makes her seem so much more in character c;

Awww, that scene was soooooooo sweet! I love how Ichigo helped Orihime! I hope she'll be okay!
The Lady Ayla chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
Yay! Renji, Rukia, and Isshin are this as well! I hope this means that other Bleach characyers will be too :)

I think Isshin is up to something. He's probably trying to set Ichigo up with Orihime...Lets hope his plan works!

The scenes with interaction between Renji, Rukia, and Ichigo are just hilarious XD

She's finally awake! I'm eager to see what will happen next!
The Lady Ayla chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
I just stumbled upon this story while I was searching for a good IchiHime fanfiction to read.

So far it seems really interesting. I love your writing style already!

Its good to know that you have 19 chapters written already. Its so frustrating when you have to wait really long for an interesting fanfiction you like to be updated.
mkenzie.leyh chapter 9 . 8/21/2013
commme onnn i realy wanna see the next onnneeeee hehehe loveeee the story keep it uppp :))))))))))))) :D !
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