Sakura isn't anywhere smart enough to outwit Shikamaru, so her winning makes no sense.

I think this is probably one of the most accurate Kibas I've seen yet.

Great job

I'm always annoyed when Sai is brought into the picture. He's a literal tool for Danzo. Not sure how things will be this time around now that they're children instead of teens. Wait and see, I guess. Until next time.

Gotta wonder what Danzo is planning anyways keep up the great work!

Intriguing, soon they shall enter Midgar, how exciting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Awesome as usual. Sai is going to do something stupid, even if he thinks its a good thing. I just know it. That's the problem with Root. They don't think. They don't say "Should we do this? I know Danzo said we should, but maybe its not such a good thing after all. Instead, all they do is obey him. And what happens when the man dies? They walk around like mindless drones without a single brain in their bodies. Keep going!

a nice story so far minus the confusing first few chapters

okay...WTF? how did it go from Naruto being adopted by cloud and tifa to Naruto being with zabua and haku in this chapter?

Not a bad story so far though gotta wonder if Naruto will ever be able to deal with sephiroth in time anyways keep up the great work!

YEAH! You are back! Sweeeeet! Sephiroth came out to play. Naturally, Orochimaru and Kabuto ran like bitches. They always run away from a fight. They fear death and Sephiroth is death incarnate. No spines from those two. Though what would you expect from a pair of snakes. I also have a feeling that Sai is not only going to get his ass kicked when with the group, but will die when in Midgar. As for Sasuke...I don't think anyone will care if that asshole dies. I won't!

Very interesting story please continue if possible

Update!

I found myself looking for this fanfic again, and once again reading it, I look forward to seeing this hopefully continued, I would really like to see more of it.

poor poor pervy sage. EVERYONE LAUGH!