| Reviews for Harriet Lillian Potter: The Untold story |
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   rocelmamaril357 chapter 1 . 8/16/2017 a good story... |
| Slytherin Angel chapter 8 . 7/24/2015 Dang...that wass TOTALLY not what i expected...it was 100x as amazing as i thought it was. But u really need to add more chaps...i truly dont like cliffhangers...theyre annoying...but also a bit fun. So write more chaps and HP fanfics and keep writing altogether cuz u r AWESOME! |
| hpfanscs chapter 8 . 9/17/2014 I like your take on the twin Potters. I hope you continue some time in the future. Good luck. |
| wolfs blood moon chapter 8 . 10/22/2011 great more plez |
| Incendiar Riddle chapter 8 . 10/9/2011 MOOOOORRRRREEEEE! |
| HermioneandMarcus chapter 8 . 9/18/2011 excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you |
| Nanettez chapter 8 . 9/18/2011 How did Harriet learn to read if she did not go to school? |
| Nanettez chapter 2 . 9/17/2011 I am confused about this. Did Harry stay in the basement all the time? Did he not go to school? |
| HermioneandMarcus chapter 7 . 8/27/2011 excellent please write more soon please and thank you |
| ZeLuNatic22 chapter 7 . 6/28/2011 update please! |
| Greenturtless chapter 5 . 11/21/2010 So far the story seems like an awesome idea however I feel like it is a bit rushed. I love the idea though but it seems more like the framework or the beginnings of a good story that needs to be fleshed out a bit. Also it leaves things unanswered because it is a bit rushed. For example I think it is too fast to have Harry not like the Malfoys. The professors didn't know she was with them so they could not have told Harry about them yet so why is he already disliking them? I can see them influencing Harry against the Malfoys but it just seems to happen to fast that makes it less believable. |
| GothicLolita009 aka Hayley M chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 An interesting turn of the plot. Well done. |
| Schnauzer.krb chapter 6 . 11/6/2010 Really good a page turner for sure. I love it! |
| Yami Alchemist chapter 1 . 10/13/2010 Well, like I said, I'd review. So, chapter 1, not as bad as you made it sound. I actually enjoyed it. It's quite a different take on the whole story and I'm curious to know what happenes next. Well, here's a suggestion that I can make (doesn't mean you have to do it) Details, Details, Details. One the key points to writing. For example, what color were the clothes Harriet was forced to wear? And,(unless this will be revealed later) why does Uncle Vernon take and drag her upstairs to the spare bedroom? Anyways, I hope that helps and now I'm off to read the other three chapters! Jaa! |
| Schnauzer.krb chapter 4 . 9/20/2010 Well this is fantastic and breath taking. I can not wait for your next chapter |
