| Reviews for Enryoshitai no! |
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LenxRinKagamine chapter 1 . 3/15/2012 lol xD random, but I liked it :p I'd love a guy Ritsu who would start a family with Mio! x3 Keep it up! ;) I'm subscribing for more :) ~ LenxRinKagamine |
Psihopatul chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 8 one shot, could you please continue this as antoher story? D ME WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS :D |
moeRitsuSmex chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 lol i love this male ritsu crack fic since i love gender bender ritsu*shot* but girly ritsu are enjoyable too x3 is it me but wth mio is kinda OOC here? o_O but anyway u just made my day! |
Gasian Gaond chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 damn review button just won't work... ohmigod, this is totally awesome, I was wondering when people would pick up the female fans' boy Ritsu joke and turn it into a crackfic. The Mitsu insert is greatly appreciated, although I thought this would turn into a hilarious Ricchan harlem fic *shot* Please write more! XD |
djyxa chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 LOL! I almost had the same dream, well except some the details though.. :) |
BuRiChiFaN chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 0KASHII! ! I LIKE IT! and for s0me reas0n,even if ritz turned male,i love that scene when she was sleeping with mi0 then their kid appeared..they really l0oked like a happy family! anyway, if you're interested, try checking this 0ut: [ . ] ryu-san and d0nkey-san created it.. 0OKINI f0r the nice read btw..] |
sephisoverlord chapter 1 . 9/11/2010 Oy, Ritsu. :) one word. - epic. :D |
Mitsu LOVE chapter 1 . 9/11/2010 WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is damn hilurious man! XDD I LOVEEEEE this sooo much! unbelievable u written sooo well based on their character! u're good! I love the part Mio wants her blazer back XDD Ritsu! Awwww! a male Ritsu but female inside? tats hilorius and tats excatly how ritsu will act XDD THNAK YOU SOOO MUCH! |
soapbox chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 This story was kind of funny, taken for what it was, if it was a "crack fic." However, I'd like to point out that it may really offend some people, as it had serious overtones of sexism and homophobia. The first being "turn a MERE girl into a boy" as if a girl is less than a boy. The other is Mio's speech about how she couldn't be happy with Ritsu, or make good memories, or have a family, as they are both women. As we 'probably' both know, many female/female couples do all of the above. I'm not too touchy, but many people are. I can take a lot of crazy, odd, weird, disgusting, etc, in my fan fiction. I felt I should point out the instances of sexism and homophobia in this story, as they seemed almost unintentional, or uninformed. I'm thinking maybe you didn't even realize, or have a clue, or may be on the younger side and not know better yet. Regardless, this would have been A LOT better without the phobias sneaking through the mix, and I don't think you were trying to write about the sexism/ homophobia in society, I think you were trying to write a funny crack fic. Those two above mentioned points really got in the way of the "enjoyment factor" for this reader. I hope to encourage you to be aware, not discourage you at all from writing. |
SleepyHydrilla chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 "… You don't have to say anymore Ritsu… because… I'll make you mine… no matter what it takes…" EPIC! XD I can wondered how wild Mio was when she said something like that... |
SHUN chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 Awesome. |