This was really good! :)

Wish u would continue this story!

Really good writing, I like the plot of the story and Arthur's mother a lot. I do think it would be good to have more of her, and to meet Veronica. What if they went to the country club with his mother, and his mother hadn't told Veronica Arthur and Ariadne were dating and she was really trying to set Veronica and Arthur up. Again. Just a thought? Really good story though. :)

i had already loved it before i started to read. but now i totally adore it long ago i read a similar story about Tiva from NCIS and the moment i began to love Inception i was sure i will write a story like that with Arthur and Ariadne if noone do before me. but today i have found yours and there's no need to write about it. besides i doubt i can write a better one :D;)

This is very cute so far, and I love Inception family stories! I hope it's not to late to ask you to continue. Good Work! ;

Arthur's mother is a rather.. difficult person, but I like her, since she caused Arthur and Ariadne to spend the night together and talk. And kiss (again). Still it wasn't very nice what she said about Ari and her parents, so I can totally understand Arthur's reaction! I'm really excited for the epilogue and what will happen next :)

I love your penname XD

Sess n kagura for ever!

XD

Wow inception 5 times?

I totally understand XD

Wooohoooo! Lol

Reviews are great motivators!

I'd really like to see more!

You go Arthur! I would've definitely did the same thing he did...hate it when people give you that disapproving crap.

Wonderful writing!

cute story, and i'd love to meet veronica. see you next update

eep!

SO cute and I'm happy that you're going to write more for this!

LOVEDDD THISS SOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHH

I like how they were pretending at first and now are TOGETHER! Can't wait to see how Veronica reacts to Arthur and Ariadne being together, because how you said Veronica has been asking for Arthur it seems like she still likes him and might idk hurt Ariadne... Hope you update soon.