Very Nice Story, Misa Light Bondage?

THIS IS SO CANON AND ACCURATE TO HOW I WOULD EXPECT LIGHT TO ACT. 10/10 GOOD

Very very nice. Well thought out. I like the way you speak, it's very eloquent. I can go on and on. I love the psychology of their relationship, it's deeper than most people realize in this fandom. They don't click at all. It's not two sides, it's completely one sided and she is warped through a twisted vision of how she should really be treated. She sinks down as low as she can go with light, which would be attributed to a lot of things (perhaps low self esteem, traumatic past with the stalker and wanting a powerful male around to protect her, etc.) I like your point about exploring in fanfiction the other world the canon verse doesn't show. Wonderful fic!

I believe this was a very interesting look at their relationship and I think the parts About Misa just being A symbol in light's eyes was an interesting touch so I am looking forward if there is anymore Fan-Fic on this.

i love how a 13 year old knows what bondage and ball gags are D

Loved it3

This is SO in character, it's scary XD

Awesome job, this, uh, "pairing" is hard to write, but I love it when it's done right, like you.:D

fav'd.

ps. Yeah, Light would have done

I dont know how you did it - i was basically just looking for fanfic porn - but you wrote something so intruiging i found myself hooked, even after i got it wasn't one of those fics. The idea of a control obsession stretching on even to his sexlife - just faccinating! I'm hooked on psychology, so I'm surprised I didn't think of that myself. Anyway, that would explain so much. Great fic, thanks for sharing.

NOT A LEMON, thank Kira. JK, but seriously, good work. It shows Light as himself, not the lovesick fool that fangirls prefer to see.

Wow! I think you wrote Light very good. Great! :)

One of the better pieces I've read.

I'm pretty jaded when it comes to reading about characters engaging in sex. I'm used to seeing either pure lemons (nothing wrong with those of course, I just feel they get repetitive) or lemons inserted into real stories for the sake of, well, inserting a lemon because readers want it or something. My reaction to the latter tends to be "okay, so they fucked, now where does the actual story pick up again".

This fic was marvellously refreshing for me. You've made it interesting, it's -about something-. It definitely works as a way to display insight into Light's god-complex and what Misa's part in it could realistically be. Well done.

wonderfully done! i loved how insightful you were about light's character. i totally agree with you that he's not into girls, and that he's pretty much just an asexual being. he knows what his end goal is and he won't let anything get in his way. love would be a weakness, so i don't think he's gay either. i love stories that deeply explore characters and you did it so well here. keep it up! :)

I really like this one. I always thought that's why Light wasn't interested in girls also-he would see sex as more of a weakness. The only indulgence he allows himself is writing in the Death Note, because that's based on an ideal that he's working towards. Focus on something carnal and human (other than as a manipulation tool) seems to be unacceptable for him.

This was a nice exploration of Light's nature. Very well done.

Wow, that last bit that you said about him in the A/N at the bottom made him sound like my cat! Except, not about the sexual part - she's been spayed already, and I don't think she cares about that thing anyway.

Yeah, but I love this one, it's not thoroughly sick like your other ones, but not thoroughly innocent like anyone else's. It encompasses pretty much what I think about the Light Misa pairing (although I doubt I'd actually write a LightxMisa fic any time soon).

Yes, it's actually mentioned in the volume 13 that Light can't actually love a woman in the same way that any normal person could, but that - to the contrary - he makes up for it with his love for Humanity as a whole (or, at least the good bits of it).

Well done again, if you could write something insightful like this again with another pairing (canon or non-canon, take your pick (although, I have actually heard someone say that LightxL actually counts as canon, for some reason, but don't do that one if you don't want to)), I'll definately read it, so just keep 'em coming!

Thanks again for your brilliance, just try to keep the sickest parts of your mind out of your fics, like you have for this (although, I wouldn't say no for a couple more chapters of 'The Other Plan' - I really like THAT one!)

Thanks again,

Ruin Takada

I really liked this one-shot. It seems to me that if we could see behind the scenes of Light and Misa's relationship, it'd be very much like this. I'm wondering where the inspiration for the ball-gag came from, though...my first thought was that you simply got tired of listening to Anime!Misa's annoying voice. But then again, maybe I should just expect kink by now (albeit soft kink in this case). I still haven't forgotten L's dead rats.

Hmm, I'd forgotten about Light's plan to kill Misa after Rem's death. Thinking back now, I seem to remember there being some sort of reason for it, but d*mned if I know what it is. Usefulness (and sex)?

Btw, thanks for faving my "Apple" story! Of the few stories I've written, I like that one the best, and I'm kinda proud of the backstory I made for L. So I'm glad you enjoyed it!