I love your plot.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

love this story but im a little confuse about a few things such as the twins vacation for their birthday and im also confuse about the part with ginny being in jail since time you wrote about ginny she was caretaker at hogwarts so how did she end up in prison?

It is a great story. Very well written. But there are certain improvements that could be made. The concept was good but it feels like you only gave a summary of the events. You could try to add special moments in the story to make it better, like adding cute moments between the couples (example- enjoying a picnic or a date, spending time together, their wedding vows. Like the scene where we could hear the sound of music coming from the room. give a little description of what was happening. for all it was happening was that Harry was listening to music in his room. It feels like the relationship was sunshine and daises. They did have any arguments at all(which cannot be true for any relationships ;) ). The relationship did not add anything to the story except for the epilogue). It felt like that the story was too focused, that Cedric or Remus do not have roles to play except for a few scenes, they are there just for the sake of it. Try adding POVs in the story. Tell the story from the POVs of different characters and add emotions to it. Build the timeline rather than giving raw facts.

I hope you do not take my feedback as criticism of you and hopefully you gained something from my advice.

Brilliant story

Damn you Dumbledore!

Why did you have to bash Fred and George?

this is really good well done

Great story. Not much I can say about it except that it’s enjoyable to read

Three hours of my life well spent, my friend. Amazing, amazing work.

The plot line of this story is amazing. I love it. Fabulous. The writing could use some work, and the conversations could be less blocky. No one talks like "I am truely sorry" people use contractions. Not Flaming.

This was one fantastic story. There were many twists and turns that just boggled the mind. I love reading your stories. Keep up the great work.

I've read this 100 times and I still love it! Great job!

ohh harry and cedric i ship it i totaly 100% ship it

Bravo I have read your story through and through and thank you for the ride