Pretty please with a naked character of your choice, willingly tied up and blindfolded for you!

Ugh, that is almost a reason not to review! I can't think of anyone at all who I would want to see tied up, naked and blindfolded. Maybe it is just me that sees things differently to others.

Anyway, the chapter was fine but stopped too early, I wanted to hear the details of the meeting that evening. At least the next part is already posted so I don't have to wait long to find out.

Hopefully Snape will ponder this and revise his opinion of Harry and let this be carried over into his attitude towards him, in private at least.

Still waiting for more about Draco, who has hardly been mentioned at all.

You are probably aware that the correct quote at the end of chapter 3 was Once more unto the breach, rather than into. I will presume that it was Harry that was misquoting Shakespeare. However, it might be worth putting this in an AN at the end of the chapter.

Although this section of the story is shown as involving Harry and Draco we have not seen much of Draco, more of Snape so far. Maybe Draco will have more prominence in the next couple of chapters.

I thought it a good idea to use muggle techniques and books, particularly since what Snape had been teaching Harry last year had clearly not worked. Maybe this will be the trigger for Snape starting to realise that Harry is not his father and that Hermione might have some good ideas.

Seems like Neville will start to feature in the story, at least as far as exercise/training is concerned. I wonder if Luna will be around?

Snape would be proud of Draco - spending time figuring things out. Think it interesting that Draco is planning to introduce Harry to Lucius. Should certainly make it clear to Lucius why Draco will not be joining the dark lord, thus relieving Luciou of a lot of worry, but hopefully Lucius will also be able to show Draco the best way to act.

Wonder if Draco will be able to persuade and of his friends to follow/join Harry or if he will be the lone Slytherin.

I'm a bit sorry that this is going to end up ultimately as Harry-Lucius. I personally would prefer Draco - they are more suited in age and neither is already married. However, I did read your profile before starting the story so know which pairings you prefer.

yeh! a nice draco, harry improving in occulmency, cant wait to read the next update

*grins just as widely as Harry*

he did it! he pushed Snape from his mind! And he didn't break anything around him although he was livid! Hurray!

Uhm ... back to the beginning. Wow for Draco's behavior! I guess he took some anger control classes too, eh? He must have a lot of self-control to stop calling Hermione nasty names and to actually work together with Harry on a potion!

Oooh i'm so curious what he's going to say to Harry at their meeting!

No, no no! That was a horrible memory! I'm glad that Harry accidentally added the second memory though, and that Snape took it more than seriously. Even if he still doesn't like Harry, at least it changes his opinion on him. He will protect him from now on, won't he? at least that's what i'm hoping!

Bloody hell! Snape laughed? He actually laughed at something Harry said? That's nearly impossible!

Again, i'm very proud of Harry! But the molten metal is kind of scary though, must look painful indeed ;)

I'm wondering why Snape wants to see the books? Isn't it enough that they're helping Harry with the anger control and occlumency? Because although he couldn't keep Snape out of his mind, he kept calm and only showed him memories that he was allowed to see, right? not random, embarrassing memories.

I can't wait to see how the relationship between Harry and Snape evolves, because i'm pretty sure it's going to get better! I just don't see how yet!

Hey, how come Draco made an unfriendly comment? What's he up to? I thought he wanted to suck up to Harry or something like that? It worries me a little bit, but the Malfoy curse must be too strong for him to resist, so i guess he'll be helping Harry in the end, right?

What's up with Dumbledore though? i'm starting to really not like him! all this scheming at the expense of Harry! It really is like he's playing a master chess game! I'm guessing it's all 'for the greater good', but still i don't like it! Poor Harry! And Snape too, for that matter ;)

Yay! Draco feels that Harry is more powerful than old Snake-face! It's gonna be the shock of their lifetime to the trio that Draco doesn't want to follow Voldemort though!

But if Harry and Lucius meet, won't Lucius want to follow Harry too? That's going to be ... complicated at the least! But it would also mean that Snape doesn't have to be the only spy anymore! Yay again!

I liked this. I hope there's more on your site. :) guess i'll find out in a second.

Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is incredible. I don't have any idea where this will go, and given the obscene amount of fan fiction I've read in the past few years, I find that really intriguing. And if you are offering lemons for reviews, I vote for a naked Snape.

Will there be anymore in the series?