| Reviews for Lockhart |
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JammyWammy chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 This story really stayed with me.I like how you portrayed her fight for survival and Cloud's reaction when he finally knew everything. Thank you for writing this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 Barret! The scene in which they meet was very well done. They didn't rush into it, and the fact that she was embarrassed and hesitant was realistic! |
lapaxlove chapter 4 . 6/10/2013 That was absolutely touching & sad, I loved this story so much! so full of emotions! |
Cascade00 chapter 4 . 7/23/2012 Every page made me cry...(TT) |
Erilin-chan chapter 4 . 8/21/2011 I really, really like this story! It's short but very moving. So much is said in such little words. Really like the idea and the writing is brilliant! I like both Tifa's and Cloud's reactions they fit excellently I think. |
Erilin-chan chapter 3 . 8/21/2011 Hehe, Cloud comes into the picture! Figures that she never told him - to personal and didn't want to add to his woes. |
Erilin-chan chapter 2 . 8/21/2011 Such a good story! Love it! I was so shocked that they pulled down sector 7, so sad. I agree she defiantly got her motherly side from Marlene, who ISN'T swayed by her into motherlyness! |
Erilin-chan chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 Wow, I like this story. Bit gritty but I like it! |
J Luc Pitard chapter 4 . 10/20/2010 Interesting back story for Tifa. I liked the added story about Cloud wondering what had shaped her. The story could almost be reordered, with the third going first and the fourth bookending it. The first chapter is probably my fave as the story of her beginning life on the streets gives us the sense of her struggles and how she copes and unintentionally charms the few people who care for her. |
Aslickain Kiant chapter 4 . 10/19/2010 How come I miss all the good stories abt cloud and tifa? *pouts* I need more! . r u writing any current TifaxCloud stuff? U no, tht involves Ferier (did I spell tht rite?) and Apacolypse and AVALANCHE? If u r, can I please know? |
Kyu-Momo chapter 4 . 9/28/2010 Awww... that was sweet. Thanks for that. |
cloudlover2989 chapter 4 . 9/20/2010 im glad she found what she needed in the end im upset its over though whats next |
tifa07 chapter 4 . 9/19/2010 You know, I've never read angst stories, for a reason that I know it will nothing but a drama and full of emotions in it. I prefer romantic comedy anytime. :D But this story, when I read its first chapter, I couldn't stop myself from reading it. I really love it, it's plot and characterization, you made great a job on it. You somehow explained why Tifa has a big heart and understand people around her especially Cloud. I also love how Cloud show her that he would never judge her and love all of her. Really, one of the best CloTi fanfic I ever read. Thank you for this treat and hope you'll write another Cloti story |
WellingtonBoot chapter 4 . 9/19/2010 Wow this is so lovely. You're really very good at fluff and drama combined. I would really like to give Tifa a hug myself right now. And bless Cloud. Of all people he would be the least likely to judge anyone, I think. Thank you for the Cloti fix! |
WellingtonBoot chapter 2 . 9/19/2010 Quick note on this chapter while I'm reading it. This line, "All the people⦠innocent, guilty, poor, young, old, black, white, everything..." the 'black, white' felt really unnecessary. It distracted me from the tragedy of the moment because the event itself is completely unrelated to race or even discrimination. But yeah, maybe that's just me being a fuss pot lol. Ignore me... *sidles away* |