this was fantastic!

I really enjoyed this :) I liked the storyline and the happy ending. xx

This is really good, suspenseful and you hooked me from the beginning. I loved inception, every character was flawless and you managed to keep their quirks and banter. :)

I really loved it! You are a great writer :)

I'm pretty much obsessed with this story! Amazing job! I loved the prompt and I was hooked from the start! Loved it!

I loved ur story! U had such a nice grasp of the style of yeach character. You didnt change them or make them ur own u just kept true to the characters. I LOVE Arthur, I think his character is sooo sexy! LOL. I was also pleased how in the movie Ariadne was not just some chick. She was not just a love intrast. She was an active member of the story and it was lovely to have that little hint of romance with her and Arthur. Write more soon. :)

Leah

Great, suspenseful story! :)

Great story! I really liked the idea of Ari, pregnant and on the run to save everyone. I'm so glad that they got their happy ending too :) Nice job!

This is definitely one of the best Inception fics I have ever read! I totally loved every bit of it.

Wow! This is such a fantastic story! I love it! Well done!

Best wishes!

Ah god, that last chapter was hot.

I almost forgot what I was going to review about, ahah.

I think that this story is IMPECCABLE. You did a fantastic job describing the action scenes. I especially find the scene where Ariadne cuts her inner thigh to be very poignant; I can almost feel that blade against my own thigh. I also found the prevalence of action over romance to be a very tasteful way of highlighting their relationship. Oh, and I deeply enjoyed the incorporation of different cities and settings; the constantly changing setting emphasized the danger that Ariadne was in and the island that she had become for most of the story.

What I would have liked to see more developed though, is the reasoning behind Ariadne's hiding from Eames and Arthur when they were in Michigan. I understand that her main motive was that she didn't want to compromise Arthur, but other than that, it was slightly underdeveloped and could have used a little more delving into.

All in all, a very great job with the prompt! I pleased to see the theme carried through. You're a fantastic writer. I hope to read more of your work!

I love you. I love this story.

There was a nice amount of suffrage to the point where it wasn't overdone and above a little papercut which I worship of you!

The romance, hurt and whatnot all tied together well!

Isabella scared me. LOL GLAD SHE DIED.

I love Saito. He's so bad ass.

Awesome story! ;) Enjoyed it!

Amazing story!

loved it!

loved it!