This was cute!

It's cute :) A bit choppy at times, but its cute :) The beginning was a bit confusing, maybe you should have made it seem more like they were trying to fool Smoker and Luffy rather than just standing there for a bit XD but its very cute :)

~Skry~

Hey! Quite cute storyyy! write more!

You could make the summary

"You! Why did you run away? It was pointless, you know!" She yelled at the man named Roronoa Zoro, the pirate with a 120 million beli bounty on his head, pointing an accusing finger at him.

"Here are your glasses." He said simply as if not being able to hear what she said awhile ago.

I think those are the most fit sentences.

I like the story, and I don't think it's OOC. At least, not for a ZoTash story.

Btw, you got me hooked on CYS

But being me, I had to start at the very beginning which means I'm somewhere in 2005 now. (As in the year they were published)

"Hey." He spoke and once she turned to him, he simply said, "Catch me." before running away.

Lol, thats something that would really happen in OP. XD

I liked it. I like ZoTash and this was cute, despite all OOC-ness.